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Lets Minichu on Fear poetry Contest, Sponsored by Mohan Chutani 09/17/23

 

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Fear of Abduction By Alien Life

colorful pifflewigs
probed my brain cells with their vivid violet claws
talon digs

twelve orange eyes
observe the trembling of my jaws
their prize

my tears
alien laws
fears

colorful pifflewigs
observe the trembling of my jaws
fears

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Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/11/2023 2:34:00 PM Great one Jan! Congratulations! :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2023 2:35:00 PM thanks so much for dropping by xx :-) hugs jan xx

Karen Jones Date: 10/7/2023 9:05:00 PM Congratulations on a win. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2023 2:35:00 PM thanks Karen:-) hugs jan xx

Robert Lindley Date: 9/21/2023 11:18:00 AM A very imaginative new creation my friend. Originality at its finest. Hideous picture as well. Just right for Halloween coming. A fav. . What is pifflewigs? Never heard that word before. God bless you. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/24/2023 7:15:00 AM Pifflewigs is a made up word, i read lots of Caren's many amazing poems and she is often making up names:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger Date: 9/21/2023 3:05:00 AM I am loving this pifflewig; I mean LOVING this pifflewig! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/21/2023 9:40:00 AM aww thanks Caren, as you can see from the comments the inspiration for the word 'pifflewigs' comes as a result of reading the fun names you create in some of your amazing poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel Date: 9/19/2023 2:09:00 AM Very funny, Jan, great pic too:) "pifflewigs" - great word:) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/21/2023 9:37:00 AM Thanks so much Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Jerry Brotherton Date: 9/18/2023 5:55:00 PM I wonder if all Pifflewigs have orange nipples. Or is it their ranking system. Like first nipple pifflewig, second nipple pifflewig. Thanks for the giggle Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/21/2023 9:37:00 AM thanks Jerry I originally had them with scarlet eyes then found the pic so I altered it:-) hugs Jan xx

Nancy Kaufman Date: 9/18/2023 6:50:00 AM Hi Jan, Well I now know a new word thank you for this creative and fun write. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/18/2023 7:04:00 AM I can thank Caren , she has such a wonderful imagination i was inspired to think of a new word lol. Not sure pifflewigs will make its way into the dictionary lol:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/17/2023 7:53:00 PM So, they were after your jaws, eh?! Did you surprise the aliens with 'JAWS?! ~ Tide L. Wave Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/18/2023 2:04:00 AM well I had to get it to rhyme somehow and i bet if pifflewigs infiltrated your brain you would quake in your boots lol lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 9/17/2023 7:10:00 PM Cute one Jan, even his nipples are orange :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/18/2023 2:03:00 AM ha ha ha I was looking at his eyes ha ha ha I hadn't noticed his nipples lol, your comment has made my day:-) hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau Date: 9/17/2023 5:02:00 PM if i had only one pifflewig dear poet ;) i tell you jan; this iz poetry! And a note to you....i can't help the way i write, or rather what i 95% uv the time, write about. Yes, many are desires, yet the most are experiences uv mine...it wuz superb reading you tonight ;)...much love, james Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/18/2023 2:03:00 AM Thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/17/2023 10:43:00 AM - An encounter with this creature ... I would have been terrified, Jan :) - hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/17/2023 11:53:00 AM the stuff of nightmares Anne-Lise, not sure what Mohan will think but i write whatever comes into my head:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane Date: 9/17/2023 9:31:00 AM If pifflewigs are anything like fluff nuggets, I'd suggest keeping your distance. Orange eyes! Oh my! I've heard their vivid violet claws are as violent as grizzly bear paws. I think I'll have to write something about the fluff nuggets, but not in Minichu form. What's the harm? Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/17/2023 11:53:00 AM I remember doing poems using silly names all inspired by Caren:-) she is a terrific poetess, so prolific writing 10 amazing poems every day. I wish i could borrow her muse Trixie:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane Date: 9/17/2023 10:39:00 AM Karen would inspire many poets here if they'd read her. Her imagination is a gem to treasure. Jan Allison Date: 9/17/2023 9:37:00 AM lol Lin have you been inspired by Caren too lol Fluff nuggets sound cute - when i found the AI created image I changed my original scarlet eyes to orange :-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin Date: 9/17/2023 9:12:00 AM Jan, love the "pifflewigs", fun and creative, hugs. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/17/2023 9:17:00 AM Thanks Tania, I read a lot of Caren's poems and she is always making up fun words and I got inspired:-) hugs Jan xx