Fear

The last time I went to the beach
Watching my grandson play
He was caught by rogue wave
Was being pulled out of the way

I tried to run through waist deep 
Water, to pull him safely in
Just had grabbed into my clinch
When a horrible a pain did begin

I was sure something humongous
That had bitten me 
Shark had to be his name
I screamed and let go and no one came

I ran to get the child again
Even though I was in terrible pain
Just as I had him in my grip
The thing bit me again

I held on this time 
Dared to not let go
In horrendous pain
I pulled him safely to the shore

When I got out of the water
The pain was even worse
I went back and washed 
In the sea water to try to ease the hurt

We evetually got to a pharmacy
To see what they suggest
He gave me some medicine
With which to keep the places wet

The lesson that I learned from this
Be careful at the beach
Because there could be something lurking
Just under your feet

(It was a jelly fish which I never saw and he stung me twice. I had places on my thighs and 
both lower legs. To this day I have an indented place on my lower leg where I guess the skin 
was digested by the poison.  Two weeks after it happened I shaved my legs and the intense 
pain started again and I had to go to an emergency room.  I had to have shots cortizone and 
dose packs and anti-itch creams and antibiotics.  This was no fun.  I do not have an 
understanding husband and this was one of those hurts that was in the poem "Unloved".)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dvorkis Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 4:02 AM
holy freakin' hell. you mean after all this nightmare was over your husband just shrugged off your pain like an uncomfortable sweater or something? If that happened to me the pain would have just multiplied by a few thousand right then and there. wow, and I thought the jellyfish had a nasty sting...
Freakasso Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 1:33 AM
Truely Said from the heart Sara, Very touching indeed. do keep writing. I wrote that poem on Obama from what appeared in the news and the front page of News papers. Men will always be Men. god bless Prince
Babcock Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 3:50 PM
Oh Sara that sounds so painful. I hope I never get stung by one of those jelly fish. I am glad your grandson was safe and with your quick thinking saved him from being stung. Thank you for your comments. God Bless Phyl
Fraser Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 3:07 PM
Great write Sara, jelly stings can be lethal and darned sore>>James
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