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Fear

The last time I went to the beach Watching my grandson play He was caught by rogue wave Was being pulled out of the way I tried to run through waist deep Water, to pull him safely in Just had grabbed into my clinch When a horrible a pain did begin I was sure something humongous That had bitten me Shark had to be his name I screamed and let go and no one came I ran to get the child again Even though I was in terrible pain Just as I had him in my grip The thing bit me again I held on this time Dared to not let go In horrendous pain I pulled him safely to the shore When I got out of the water The pain was even worse I went back and washed In the sea water to try to ease the hurt We evetually got to a pharmacy To see what they suggest He gave me some medicine With which to keep the places wet The lesson that I learned from this Be careful at the beach Because there could be something lurking Just under your feet (It was a jelly fish which I never saw and he stung me twice. I had places on my thighs and both lower legs. To this day I have an indented place on my lower leg where I guess the skin was digested by the poison. Two weeks after it happened I shaved my legs and the intense pain started again and I had to go to an emergency room. I had to have shots cortizone and dose packs and anti-itch creams and antibiotics. This was no fun. I do not have an understanding husband and this was one of those hurts that was in the poem "Unloved".)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/23/2009 4:02:00 AM
holy freakin' hell. you mean after all this nightmare was over your husband just shrugged off your pain like an uncomfortable sweater or something? If that happened to me the pain would have just multiplied by a few thousand right then and there. wow, and I thought the jellyfish had a nasty sting...
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Date: 7/21/2009 1:33:00 AM
Truely Said from the heart Sara, Very touching indeed. do keep writing. I wrote that poem on Obama from what appeared in the news and the front page of News papers. Men will always be Men. god bless Prince
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Date: 7/19/2009 3:50:00 PM
Oh Sara that sounds so painful. I hope I never get stung by one of those jelly fish. I am glad your grandson was safe and with your quick thinking saved him from being stung. Thank you for your comments. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/19/2009 3:07:00 PM
Great write Sara, jelly stings can be lethal and darned sore>>James
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