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'fear - Swept Away'

our
moments 
together
calling to mind
the joy and even the pain make me smile

#~~~~~~~~~~~~~#

 
I frown when I see the fear in your eyes
reflecting pain
I love you
with no
fear 


Contest Name: “Smiles and Frowns”
By: Wilma N. Neels


190720111415

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/25/2011 10:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Smiles and Frowns" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 7/24/2011 10:13:00 AM

hey Wilma, congrats on a great win, David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 3:49:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on another exiting win with fantastic lines of expression luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2011 11:46:00 AM

This was one I really liked from the very beginning. For me, probably one of the top three!! congratulations, Wilma, on the win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/23/2011 10:53:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2011 11:25:00 AM

Just seeing this one again. it's really GOOD!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/22/2011 9:32:00 AM

urrgh-- my connection's awful today-- even my mail won't load but hmm good thing Soup is (although it takes forever) like right now I am re-typing this because it went system error Again-- oh phooey! well just dropping by to say hi missy :0 hope your day's good mwahugs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/21/2011 10:48:00 AM

Sounds like unconditional love to me, ;) Very cool approach to the contest, Missy! and haha! You sure made me laugh aloud with that butt thing-- I think my butt fell asleep, haha! Thanks for your comments in mine, haha trust you to smile on that masquerade write of mine :D

Emma Mantle

Date: 7/21/2011 9:10:00 AM

Love the Tetractys. This is a great entry, best wishes for the contest. Thanks for stopping by my work. Em :)

James Peranteau

Date: 7/20/2011 4:13:00 AM

What a great entry Wilma ! This write flows so well, I enjoyed tremendously dear poet ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james

Judy Ball

Date: 7/20/2011 4:07:00 AM

WoW! There is so much feeling here. It gives me the vision of someone who is ill and their loved one is with them. Watching and waiting for the pain to be over and the mending to begin. Good stuff. God Bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/19/2011 7:00:00 PM

Nice take on smilae and frown, Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2011 6:50:00 PM

this is really great. Much more profound than how mine turned out! Good luck, but I am sure you wont' need it, sweetie.