Fault Line Breaking

Today marks a continuation of
my blazing accent of enlightenment.
With a tedious eye I vanquish
the demon taunting my peripheral
of lamentable memories and efforts
torn asunder before grateful fruition.

The path that leads to your door
fills me more than leaden prayers
or matchbook agendas disposable.
My growth thrives in your beacon,
offering a glimpse of manifested
hope behind the shadow of suspicion.

Blood pumps steady regardless
of my demeanor, yet now such
automation lends fruit to your tree
for seeing in me more than potential
or flaw when I rail aggressive at
the imperfection of each breath of life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/18/2009 11:09:00 AM
I have read your poetry and enjoyed it. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. You have done an excellent job writing this poem. May you have a wonderful an inspiring weekend John. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2009 6:58:00 PM
Well you just keep railing away, John ... smile ... this is great writing!!
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Date: 9/17/2009 12:35:00 PM
nice job, has an edgar allen poe feel.
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Date: 9/17/2009 12:01:00 PM
"the demon taunting my peripheral of lamentable memories" Great line and nice work John...Raul
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Date: 9/17/2009 10:04:00 AM
excellent as usual! Light & Love and glad to read you again!
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