Fathoms Deep

NOT WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST

I often write about the ocean's secrets,
of its crashing waves that roar in apogee
and the treasures it washes upon the shore.
I've verses founded on tales of sailor's lore.
Stanzas about fragile seashells and abalone
and of gulls noisily squawking in cacophony.

I've penned Sonnet filled with romantic notions
in which mermaids live in depths of oceans.
I wrote I'd found Atlantis beneath the waves,
and chests of gold and silver in a maze of caves.
I am always watching out for predatory sharks,
for in ocean waters, they are considered hierarchs.

I've claimed the sun cries when twilight is nigh.
When his day his done, he yawns his 'goodbye.'
I narrated epics of its tide, controlled by the moon,
and of sirens who lure men with a beguiling tune.
Poems tell of typhoons, caused by Neptune's hand,
and of shipwrecks, men and cargo strewn on sand.

The ocean beckons to me as I stand on the cliffs.
It speaks in the breakers. My thought often drifts
to how beautiful are the waters that God has made.
It covers most of Earth's surface with salty brine.
The magnitude of its power, I would dare not define.
Much is unknown about what lies beneath the deep
but all its secrets, it seems, the ocean intends to keep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/16/2023 7:32:00 AM
My very good friend this another fantastic piece with its wonderful imagery intact! So very magically descriptive and awesomely deep. Yet again a fine fav for my growing list. Your poetry top class as always! God bless you.
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/16/2023 7:56:00 AM
I'm quite delighted with reading your kind remarks. Thank you for your visits to my poetry today, Robert. Have a happy weekend.
Date: 9/16/2023 5:22:00 AM
Lin, your beautiful lines do provoke thought, not only in their boastful imagery but in the mysteries held forever in the deep! What a wonderful write to read with my morning coffee!!! Happy Saturday xxoo
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:01:00 AM
I'm so fond of your poetry, Mike, that it's only fair you enjoy mine. To be read over morning coffee is a bonus! Thanks for letting me know that. Happy weekend and hugs to you.
Date: 9/16/2023 4:34:00 AM
Fantastic Lin. Highlights for me are "squawking in cacophony"; "moon/ typhoons; Neptune's, and strewn"... this poem rolls like the tides of time; again and again. So well written Lin. Thanks for this
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:00:00 AM
Your comments always give credence to the points I hope to make. Thanks a lot for that, Jeff.
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