Father's Day

Father's Day

Every day is Father's Day
Dad grew old and frail in natural order we fear
War and age created gaps in time, holes in reason
Added to detraction's on his decline
Generations formed coalitions without permission
Things come into existence for a time 
We are the children by him and by his side
Who grew, arms and legs, solid foundations 
Creation, with other supports, sometimes failed
We grew our own gaps, holes in reason, ways to end
By digging in the wrong direction
Then, hung with vigilance, understanding, change
Clinging to hope like virgins in May
Waiting for what may come our way
Dad survives purely on love in poor health
Between you and me, he feels the power  
We are his children, his pillars of support
No matter what the pain or cost
Old, collapsed, an ancient structure
Falling our way one last time
We catch and hold him up in honor
As pillars on either side to do just that

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/16/2014 11:27:00 PM
thank you for the comment on my comment.
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Date: 6/16/2014 7:46:00 PM
What Song of the Beatles, did your daughter send? :) Thanks for the kind reply
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 6/16/2014 9:27:00 PM
Hi Linda, "Birthday" by The Beatles. I know, it doesn't make sense but at least it was a song of celebration and she did write "Happy Father's Day." and you really can't go wrong with The Beatles. Take care. Earl
Date: 6/15/2014 7:35:00 PM
Earl, I hope you had a wonderful Father's day. Once again, I was moved by your poem...Linda
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Date: 6/15/2014 8:15:00 PM
Good Evening Linda, You are very kind to ask. Thank you very much. Yes. My daughter sent me a Beatles song. She lives in NJ. My son sent me a nice letter from China. He works in China. No body beat me up today. Life is good. I hope you are having a great day. Take care. Earl
Date: 6/11/2014 10:28:00 PM
Earl, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 6/12/2014 7:51:00 AM
Good morning Linda. I appreciate your commenting. My dad was a truly amazing man. I'm not saying that because he was my dad. He had a heart of gold and was the most honorable person I have ever met and my best friend. I did put some heart and soul into the poem. Thanks again and have a great day. Earl
Date: 6/10/2014 7:42:00 PM
a greeat win so well deserved, earl.. higgs
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Date: 6/10/2014 8:23:00 PM
Hi Nette, Thanks again. Congratulations to you too for your win in the Father's Day poetry contest. You have a well crafted meaningful poem there. It was a great tribute to your dad and to honor him in fine style. Take care. Earl
Date: 6/9/2014 10:58:00 PM
Nicely done. congrats on the win, earl
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 6/10/2014 2:06:00 AM
Congratulations yourself Dr. Mehta on your win! I read your Father's Day poem. It was very powerful. Nice job. Thank you for recognizing my work. Earl
Date: 6/9/2014 7:39:00 PM
How great that his children are returning some of the love he lavished on them when he had his health. Great poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/9/2014 9:30:00 PM
Hi Joyce. He was a great man and a great dad. He had 5 pillars to be exact. We were all lucky. Thank you for your kind words, Take care. Earl
Date: 6/9/2014 5:46:00 AM
Fantastic tribute you have paid to your dad with honor and respect, Earl
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Date: 6/9/2014 6:12:00 AM
Good morning Dr. Mehta, My father was a great man and my best friend. Thank you for commenting. Have a great day. Earl
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