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Father of My Dreams

He came to me in my dreams, Night after night. Dad, you’re not supposed to be here. He never talked, He just hung out with me. Night after night, As though the cancer had never taken him. I finally acquiesced. We just hung out. Night after night. My family and I were hiking; My father was not around. A large rattlesnake blocked our way. Out of nowhere, my father appeared, Grabbed the snake from the path, And threw it off in the woods. He turned and ran down a dock, Into the sun, And leaped up high, Into the lake, Laughing joyfully. As he hit the water, I realized his body was naked, And it was whole, and strong, and healed. He didn’t visit again for many, many years. It does give one pause…

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Date: 7/16/2022 10:08:00 AM
It does give pause Jeff. Just a fleeting moment to let you know they are okay and lend relief to your grieving. Very nicely written and tells the tale joyously! Linda
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Date: 7/15/2022 3:19:00 PM
My mother is in my dreams only When I am under stress.Perhaps the mantle has passed and you are this generations patriarchal protector Jeff.I always enjoy what you bring to light .
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Date: 7/15/2022 3:15:00 PM
Yes, indeed, it does. Many people have had these kinds of experiences, Jeff. There is something beyond here that we still do not have a handle on. Or, at least, I believe so.
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