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Father Loves

The Father loves through day and night He shines His love into our spirit’s core Awakening blessings, dreams to excite Promising wishes will fill hearts galore The Father frees us from darkest war Silencing shame and bothersome fright Encouraging us to follow Him as mentor The Father loves through day and night The Father assures of wonders so bright Whispering psalms to those He cares for Inspiring dreams into reality that will unite He shines His love into our spirit’s core The Father brings grace and so much more Comforting those hearts who are so contrite Reminding us why love will completely restore Awakening blessings, dreams to excite The Father colors our lives in hues of insight Breathing praise into the souls who implore Reaching beyond the mind, into the twilight Promising wishes will fill hearts galore The Father satisfies our desires with splendor Miracles poured out on those He does invite To His glorious home, heaven, where we adore The Father, who is our life, our soul, our light … the Father loves A RONDEAU REDOUBLE POEM Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS June 11, 2022
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Kauffman Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 11:43 AM
Yes indeed the "Father loves" in all of the ways you highlight Gina! Congratulations on your win. Hugs and blessings dear friend!
Alex Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 8:49 AM
Wow! As usual! No comparison! Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 7:44 AM
Exceptionally fine writing, Gina, as always. Congratulations for your placement in my contest. It was a difficult one to judge and the quality of the entries was not as I had hoped.
Reese Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 8:43 AM
A very wonderful theme to write on in a most difficult style. The rhyme in verse 6 line 1 does not seem to work. Here is a suggestion. "The Father's desire is for each life to soar." Just a suggestion.
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 8:29 AM
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I can't remember if I have written one of these or not and it doesn't look so easy to write. Sara
Seeker Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 8:08 AM
An outstanding spiritual write, Gina! Thanks for sharing
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