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My eyes close tight, as they prep you for surgery... Tears fall down my face and I began to feel weary... I prayed to the Father, that your heart will pull through... To beat once again, when the last machine releases you. As an old chapter is closed up, a new heart begins another... I know you will not give up, I have always known you as a fighter... Day after day, you’re getting stronger, as the week comes to a draw. I bowed to my knees, giving thanks to the Great Physician; the healer of all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/15/2011 12:24:00 PM
that is beautiful.I see myself drawn to your poetry.Keep it up.You have a beautiful soul.
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:18:00 PM
Your work conveys decent descriptiveness in its simple and easy to read wording.
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:13:00 PM
I just love that last line, comparing the healer of all to the Great physician!
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:26:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Erin. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:00:00 AM
Soothing devotional thoughts you have penned in this write, Erin
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