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Fates Unfair

I've met so many people that this planet could do much better without, and yet it seems like my loved ones are the ones who continually check out.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/5/2010 12:46:00 PM
I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today. I am glad to see your poetry posted here amongest the others I am reading today Bill. Wishing you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/5/2010 8:08:00 AM
It seems it's always the good people who suffer the most. Loved your poem.
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Date: 3/5/2010 7:49:00 AM
Very insightful couplet here, Bill. Two of my best friends died young from cancer and they were two of the best people I have ever met. There's a lot of truth in your message here. I like to think they passed to eternal life because they had accomplished everything they were intended to do on earth successfully. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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