Fate's Footfalls

At tables scattered round the bar
they hug their drinks and wait,
to see whose empty chair is next,
who's visited by fate.
They listen for the footfalls
which for them will surely come
to take them on the last journey,
slow, maybe quick  for some.
The widowed and the broken hearts,
divorced and cast adrift,
all qualify, their day draws near
with every glass they lift.
They treat each draught with reverence,
each day a hole to fill,
from footfalls try to run away,
they run, while sitting still.
The news comes through by word of mouth,
another comrade downed,
the footfalls wash out like the tide,
one more lies in the ground.
A brief respite, still sleepless nights
'till footfalls come again
when fate returns to reap harvests
of lonely single men.
No lessons learned, through khaki eyes
of hopelessness and pain
they sit and wait for footfalls
listen-
here they come again

For Chris, Jenko and Dave- rest in peace. Sadly, you will have company soon.
Contest ' Fate's footfalls', sponsor John Lawless

March 5th 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/26/2018 10:28:00 PM
A very touching poem and tribute to lonely single men. Well done and congrats on your winning poem, Viv.
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Date: 3/21/2018 8:21:00 AM
Sadly Viv, those empty chairs keep showing up, oftentimes way to soon. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Date: 3/5/2018 8:19:00 AM
Such a touching poem Mr vivid and your footnote hits home and I'm sorry for your losses:-( hugs Jan xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/5/2018 8:27:00 PM
Thanks Jan, sad losses but avoidable. I wrote this because I'm losing friends and it makes me angry x
Date: 3/5/2018 8:02:00 AM
"Footfalls" they tell a story...I like the message...All the best
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/5/2018 8:27:00 PM
Thanks Arturo, appreciate the visit. Regards, Viv
Date: 3/5/2018 7:09:00 AM
Touching poem Viv, sadly nothing nad no one last forever..
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/5/2018 8:28:00 PM
Indeed, Silent One, but they didn't need to go so soon. What a waste. Thanks for stopping by. Regards, Viv
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