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Formed from the seed of love thoughts prime a child was woven heroine biblical prophetess in time Deborah was such, a name chosen, mine. Like a lightening bolt was she conceived a joining of aspirant souls seeking other primal roles into a world of controversy she was received. This fiery woman, a rousing Queen Bee Debbie the mothering maid the battle leader, judge conveyed authority and responsibility hers to seed. Compatriot of Moses she, from tribe of Ephraim, Mother of Israel was she. The equal of every he, such is the burden given me from the Father of man. Upon the shoulders a such a frail form this mighty burden laid. The outcome heaven made for all of life is tested and the "bees" are born.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/6/2011 6:05:00 AM
Wonderful poem on your name Debbie!Congrats on your win in the contest--kashinath
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Date: 3/4/2011 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:17:00 AM
Awesome origins of this awesome name. many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/3/2011 5:13:00 PM
a literary queen bee you are... a top winner for me, lights!! congrats to you for the win..;0 huggs, nete
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Date: 3/3/2011 3:53:00 PM
Your poems are worthy of placing much higher, Deb.....this is no exception!! You wear your name well ~~
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Date: 3/3/2011 2:08:00 PM
YOu did awesome with enclosed rhyme here, Debbie. A congratulations for you. I really enjoyed this. I just read all the winners of the contest. There were NO bad poem, everyone did really well!!
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Date: 3/3/2011 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Linda, Debbie
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Date: 3/3/2011 9:45:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your success in my contest What's in a Name.. appreciate your constant support of my endeavors on the Soup..luv..
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Date: 3/2/2011 4:15:00 AM
I like the way that she went and fought for her people leading the way when a man was afraid to go and do the battle..She must have been brave and had a close relationship with God and knew for sure that he would protect her..Enjoyed reading your interpertation of the Torah's story..Sara
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Date: 3/1/2011 1:01:00 PM
John needs a time out.
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