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Fate Says Goodbye

The rare chance entered and I leapt Would this chance arise once more Visions of fate have now been kept One more goodbye now is in store Sadness, however, does not loom The rare chance entered and I leapt I write these words of certain doom I pondered by night while I crept A long cold walk, with no hope left Stubbornness my refuge last night The rare chance entered and I leapt Yes these words have a little spite Before I ran, but this time walked I can’t forget, and have not slept Tell me why we would have talked The rare chance entered and I leapt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/18/2013 8:33:00 PM
Fate Says Goodbye; I like that. I also think that your poetry is great. I will be reading more. Thanks for sharing this one. SoupMail later. Lucilla
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Date: 3/13/2013 11:29:00 PM
Nothing like a leap of faith to add a spring to your step. You have skills my friend, I enjoyed this one as well.
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Date: 3/12/2013 8:24:00 AM
Let me begin by saying thanks for commenting on my silliness recently! These different types of poetry are not for this guy, "The Quatrain King" but you sure have a handle on them! GREAT!
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Date: 3/11/2013 10:24:00 PM
Aweee. a love lost? hello there you .. i really appreciate your comments and thank you for reading me. your poetry is inviting.. i love that.
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