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For Constance La France's G Forms - Grook poetry contest. Theme is Death.

A Grook is a type of poem that is aphoristic in nature, and often times rhyming and or short. An aphorism is a pithy that involves a semblance of truth to it. This type of poem is a form of aphoristic poetry, and usually involves themes such as the bitter truths and comparisons of humanity and nature in general.

My soul yearns to wander in a poetic garden, not to remain hidden under overgrown weeds.. (the poet) Rumi says; "It is rain that grows flowers not thunder." Some bloom like roses, some like poppies_ spreading verdant, vibrant and diverse colours.. Sunflowers reach for the sky, whilst lobelia droop towards the ground... Yet, nothing blossoms forever ~ we wither, perishing like premature petals.. Those who sowed nostalgic memories, flourish through generations - others are forgotten like wildflowers.

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Tonye George

Date: 2/1/2025 3:25:00 PM

Very true. Your words and wise. Congratulations on your win. "Nothing blossoms forever." Whether it is love, life, wealth, etc. it ends or something ends it. "Those who sowed nostalgic memories, flourish through generations -others are forgotten like wildflowers. Lovely written, Silent.

Constance La France

Date: 10/1/2024 10:15:00 AM

Silent, congratulations on your win in my Grook contest with this beautifully penned poem, love the music and quote, Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/13/2024 1:16:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your winning work. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/23/2024 1:25:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Fate of Flowers" write/Quote again. Have a blessed day writing away...........

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/22/2024 12:23:00 PM

Wise words in blossoming imagery. Congratulations! :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/22/2024 11:03:00 AM

SO, your wisdom shines through your lines with a reminder to "flourish" and remember "nostalgic memories!" So often our kids roll their eyes when we share our nostalgia but, they remember. Your images of flowers are marvelous metaphors that flesh out your quote! This is a treasure trove of imagery and wisdom. Congratulations on your win. Sending you the blessings of a garden in bloom!

Robert Sidwell

Date: 8/22/2024 10:38:00 AM

A truly enjoyable read to ponder upon. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/22/2024 8:28:00 AM

Packed with imagery, love the quote too, Silent! A fave and congrats!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/22/2024 4:37:00 AM

so true. congratulations on your win dear poet.

Valsa George

Date: 8/20/2024 7:30:00 PM

Such a sweet poem, Silent One. I so enjoyed reading this one. Yes, "nothing blossoms for ever." Flowers will wither as beauty is perishable like many other things. But the memories they leave behind do not perish. I am sure this will be a top winner. All the Best dear friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2024 10:37:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one. I am glad that rains help plants to grow and not thunder. Thanks for shairng this one with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/19/2024 12:04:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Fate of Flowers" write. Love Your Poet Quote. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away.........

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/19/2024 5:19:00 AM

Dear Silent One, I always loved reading Rumi with so much wisdom and your poem reflects that as well. Ahhh yes there is so much importance in nurturing and gentle actions in fostering growth in our garden and in life. I love reflecting on how I can cultivate my own life and what legacies do I leave behind. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/18/2024 3:21:00 PM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KDblorq3V9Y

Silent One
Date: 8/18/2024 3:31:00 PM

Thank you..A beautiful video. You read all the poems very well..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/18/2024 1:50:00 PM

this is so stunning and beautiful, has anyone ever called you a poetic Angel Silent One, ? cuz you are, I'm going to read this and use the song on my next video, I will send it when its done, Love :)

Silent One
Date: 8/18/2024 2:01:00 PM

I'm.no angel..but thank you .Appreciate you enjoying my poem..I love this song, it's so beautiful..

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/18/2024 12:43:00 PM

Yes but what if they are undergrown weeds?? Then you would have small stature issues Si I am thinking, There is a hidden memory in Every season, a litratural lining in every living litany.' That Creation causes.' I trust you are well Si.'

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/18/2024 12:05:00 PM

Dear S.O: Your quote is beautiful and so true of today. There is so much negative energy concealing all that is true and beautiful. We have to remain connected to what is good.....no matter what. I love the wisdom and there is never a truer analogy to beauty than flowers.

Jay Narain

Date: 8/18/2024 10:29:00 AM

Nice poem with philosophical touch.

Paige Hind

Date: 8/18/2024 9:17:00 AM

This has depth. I loved the quote in how you started it with the poem. Beautiful flow :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/18/2024 4:34:00 AM

I love flowers and your poem - as usual, much love and God bless you always, love, Gina

Ink Empress

Date: 8/18/2024 4:10:00 AM

Nothing blossoms forever and theres different colors and scents of flowers, all vibrant and special in their own ways. What a philosophical and deeply moving write on death! One that is deep and truly soulful! You really did an exquisite grook on this subject which is beautiful! “ Those who sowed nostalgic memories, flourish through generations -” so true and I think it is important to make memories and memories they last forever even in death! I love the quote youv used here too and flow and wordplay is stunning really! Meaningful take on this form! Best wishes silent one! You always leave me in awe