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Fate

Hallow, and unrelenting. The hands of fate. They tease, and toy. Pull, and press. No heart, just hands. Not careing. Only watching, and waiting. For their time to strike. And they do. Disaster.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/17/2011 4:17:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Kassandra. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 9:47:00 PM
Very good on this. Very intense. R.M.
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Date: 5/16/2011 2:29:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative poetry..hope u have fun on PS as u share with luv.. our contests are free so check them out ..and good luck with luv..
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Date: 5/16/2011 12:16:00 PM
I enjoyed this review. Check spelling (i.e. caring not careing). Charlotte
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