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AI- Artificial Intelligence - ChatGPT

Fate is a fickle force that blinds
and often messes with our minds,
to pull the rug from under us;
comes out of nowhere without fuss.

Fate changes things we'd never guess;
but this one change, I must confess
now overtakes poetic art;
usurps true talents we impart.

Fate has directed us to cheat;
AI - invented to now meet
the inborn talents we all share;
write poems fast- no work or care.

It uses forms correctly, while
can mimic any poet's style,
maintaining rhyme and rhythm well;
to being fake no one can tell.

God-given gifts to write, compose-
now must compete with AI prose,
as fickle fate defines new curves
this bot intelligence now serves.

Where is this going we may ask?
Will AI govern every task?
Will fate, our talents kill, dispel-
to leave each mind an empty shell?


February 15, 2023

~1st Place~
Contest: Writing Challenge - F Words Poetry
Sponsor: Constance La France
Word Chosen: No. 10 - Fate
Judged: 02/20/2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 2/21/2023 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations, Sandra! An interesting and disturbing write…
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/2/2023 7:14:00 AM
Yes, for sure, disturbing! I appreciate your visit and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/21/2023 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/21/2023 12:38:00 PM
Thank you, Sara, for your uplifting comment and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/21/2023 2:37:00 AM
Sandra, a wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge F Words, well done, I like the image too, blessings, Constance
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/21/2023 12:42:00 PM
I am so pleased you liked my 'Fate' poem Constance, and once again, I appreciate your supportive words and placement in your contest. Hugs, Sandra.
Date: 2/20/2023 5:11:00 PM
Beautiful, clever and interesting read!!! Congrats!!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/21/2023 12:44:00 PM
Thank you very much, margarita, for stopping by with your encouraging comment and congrats! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/21/2023 12:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, margarita, for stopping by
Date: 2/15/2023 9:47:00 PM
True, Sandra, it's quite shocking how ChatGPT writes awesome poetry, plagiarism will not even be known... Well written poem and I like that ending line:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/16/2023 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, Jo, for your supportive comments. This new tool was shocking to me too! Don't know how schools and colleges are going to deal with this!! Hugs, Sandra
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