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Fast Mind In a Dim Room

The room is empty but for shadows
My mirror is reflecting the setting sun
See clearly
How flowers shrink
And the spark is leaving

Targets are in reach
But the mind runs slow
Everything is achieved
And now my skills decay

But the sight is widening
And details appearing
Senses awakening
Even though
The bright is paling

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/4/2014 6:12:00 PM
Liva, well structured, much enjoyed... Linda
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