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I should have ignored the golden deacon Promising smiles and freedom from hunger Said ‘No’ to egg sandwiches and bacon Delicious smell on fingers does linger The perfect salty, crispy golden fries With preservatives, chemicals galore Cannot cook like them in a million tries Kids don’t like home cooked flavor anymore. Charming kids with boxes of happy meals Filing tummies with empty calories Doling out food that tricks, harms and congeals I have no words for their wicked glory “Should’ve said no”, I reflect with sadness As kids drag me under hills of madness. Written 05/18/2016 A poem about our addiction to McDonalds and other fast food restaurants

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/2/2017 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your third win. I have enjoyed your poem.Sara have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/13/2016 10:26:00 AM
Your English Sonnet was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 9/11/2016 4:34:00 PM
Amusing sonnet -- and, a testament to the success (warranted or not) of McDonalds. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 9/11/2016 2:08:00 PM
lol! My daughter craves their fried on a daily basis lol congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/10/2016 7:01:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your 3rd place win, beautiful written . Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/18/2016 4:45:00 PM
Hi Sara, I like your very 'outside the box' interpretation of the 'at the mountains of madness' theme. Well done, and best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/19/2016 8:48:00 AM
Yes Sandra,I tried really 'outside the box'!

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