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Fast-Moving Train

When I was a young boy I dreamed of this land And the freedom to go In a future unplanned In a world of adventure With so much to see There was much to explore For a dreamer like me And I thought of the trains As they sped on their way In a typical run On a typical day And I smiled and waved To the men passing by As I stood by the tracks With a gleam in my eye And a love for the train That was moving along With a big, heavy load And a loud, happy song But the years quickly passed And the railroad died And the vision I saw Is a dream on the side For a loud whistle blows In a land far away And the message it brings Is a caution today That a life should be led By the vision you see From a fast-moving train That is wild and free.

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Date: 11/16/2021 7:04:00 PM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this... making me nostalgic of wondrous train rides. God bless you.
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Date: 11/16/2021 1:13:00 PM
I must have missed your fast moving train Bryan when you published it last month but I'm so glad BJ's Contest has brought it to my attention. I love the energy of your and how the train acts as a metaphor of sorts for hopes and dreams free from the constraints of life. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 11/16/2021 5:27:00 AM
A beautiful poem with a great reflection at the end. Congratulations!
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Bryan Norton
Date: 11/16/2021 10:17:00 AM
Christuraj, Thank you for reading. And for your comment. I owe it to my readers to write something beautiful. Have a nice day. Bryan
Date: 11/16/2021 2:15:00 AM
Bryan, congratulations on your well deserved first place win in my poetry contest. My favorite lines from your poem were 'That a life should be led By the vision you see From a fast-moving train That is wild and free.' This is a perfect caution to embrace ones dreams! Again, congratulations on this wonderful well written work of brilliance!
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Bryan Norton
Date: 11/16/2021 10:23:00 AM
Thank you, BJ, for sponsoring this contest. I'm glad you liked my poem. I wish it could be better. I'm anxious to discover what your next theme is, if you do another contest. I have always loved trains and I really enjoyed doing this poem. Take care, Bryan
Date: 10/30/2021 2:15:00 AM
Wonderful poetry Bryan, one should climb every mountain, ford every stream, ride on the railroad whilst the dream’s in full steam… Belle
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Bryan Norton
Date: 10/30/2021 3:48:00 AM
Thank heaven for you Belle. It's so nice to have a comment now and then. Thank you for such a nice thought. I could not have put it so nicely. Take care, Bryan.

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