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Fashionista

That fashion style's come round again
for everywhere one sees
the young 'uns in their denim jeans
with rips across the knees.
Some sporting just a single slash,
others have two or more,
it must help ventilate their gait
don't know what else they're for.
If having holy clothing means
they wear a look that rocks,
it means that I am bang-on trend
with my pants, my shoes and socks.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/8/2017 12:32:00 PM
Hello Vivy, You know what you have said in your poem is so true. I would never wear jeans like that. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/3/2017 8:48:00 PM
Lol, I'm still wearing shorts I've had for 10 years. First it was acid washed, now ripped, next broken zippers?
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Date: 6/21/2017 10:13:00 AM
A good laugh. What about the ones that used hang off the buttocks? I never understood what was keeping them up..
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/27/2017 11:47:00 PM
I could tell you what keeps mine up, but this is a family website, Jean ;) x
Date: 6/11/2017 8:11:00 AM
haha Funny ending :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/12/2017 1:05:00 AM
Thanks, Becca, glad you had a chuckle x
Date: 6/7/2017 7:52:00 PM
And the ripped jeans the stores sell are more expensive than the normal unripped ones~go figure!! Funny write Viv!~Che :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/11/2017 1:36:00 AM
Yes, I've never understood that, Cheryl- my cat can do it free of charge. Viv x
Date: 6/7/2017 12:10:00 AM
Oh this made me laugh so Viv, great write!!!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/11/2017 1:37:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I shall enjoy my brief period of trendiness. Regards, Viv
Date: 6/7/2017 12:01:00 AM
Very good Viv.. Never did understand the trend of buying that looks like it already worn out.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/11/2017 1:38:00 AM
Yes, Joseph, I wonder too. Why would I want pre-stressed clothing, I'm stressed enough already.... regards, Viv
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