Fashionista

That fashion style's come round again
for everywhere one sees
the young 'uns in their denim jeans
with rips across the knees.
Some sporting just a single slash,
others have two or more,
it must help ventilate their gait
don't know what else they're for.
If having holy clothing means
they wear a look that rocks,
it means that I am bang-on trend
with my pants, my shoes and socks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 12:32 PM
Hello Vivy, You know what you have said in your poem is so true. I would never wear jeans like that. Have a nice day my friend.
Inman Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 8:48 PM
Lol, I'm still wearing shorts I've had for 10 years. First it was acid washed, now ripped, next broken zippers?
Murray Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 10:13 AM
A good laugh. What about the ones that used hang off the buttocks? I never understood what was keeping them up..
Wigley Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 11:47 PM
I could tell you what keeps mine up, but this is a family website, Jean ;) x
Teagan Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 8:11 AM
haha Funny ending :)
Wigley Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 1:05 AM
Thanks, Becca, glad you had a chuckle x
Hoffman Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 7:52 PM
And the ripped jeans the stores sell are more expensive than the normal unripped ones~go figure!! Funny write Viv!~Che :)
Wigley Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 1:36 AM
Yes, I've never understood that, Cheryl- my cat can do it free of charge. Viv x
Vaso Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 12:10 AM
Oh this made me laugh so Viv, great write!!!
Wigley Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 1:37 AM
Thanks Arthur, I shall enjoy my brief period of trendiness. Regards, Viv
Soper Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 12:01 AM
Very good Viv.. Never did understand the trend of buying that looks like it already worn out.
Wigley Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 1:38 AM
Yes, Joseph, I wonder too. Why would I want pre-stressed clothing, I'm stressed enough already.... regards, Viv
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