Fashion Maniac

She was mad after each trendy fashion For her it was a deep passion The dress she wore once Weighed less than an ounce That set all men in great commotion
March.18. 2022 Bite size Poem No.40.Poetry Contest Sponsor- Line Gauthier
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Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 8:27 AM
I would think so. I hope she came through the wearing of that dress unscathed. Reads like a good contender in the contest to me. Way to go. Sara
One Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 2:33 PM
Nice one Valsa!
Proxenos Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 6:47 AM
Hi Valsa, we had one at our wedding 21 years ago, a partner of one of our guests, people could only stare at the ounce that she decided to wear! My husband, was totally unaware, so he said, and didn't care! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Wolf Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 8:00 PM
The less she wears, the more men stare! Cute limerick, Valsa. Smiles, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 5:50 AM
It was merely pasted on, I think!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 1:50 PM
Cute. Too old to be attracted now. :)
Leffanta Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 11:43 AM
I have never forgotten the disappointment of a lover who spent a small fortune on a raw silk robe only to hear me say, "take it off; it just gets in the way" . . . . (some of us believe God did alright the first time and enhancement is just an inconvenience) Aloha!
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 11:10 AM
Lol, some are hardly worth wearing as they're falling out of them. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend Valsa. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 9:01 AM
This would cause a big stir!
Poet Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 8:06 AM
Humouristic tanka, Valsa. She appears to be in desperate need of some particular attention...
George Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 8:42 AM
Thanks a lot dear Lasaad !
Pandit Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 5:38 AM
She knew how to get attention. Fun read!
George Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 8:42 AM
Yes, she was inviting attention ! Thank you Vijay !
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