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Fashion Maniac

She was mad after each trendy fashion For her it was a deep passion The dress she wore once Weighed less than an ounce That set all men in great commotion March.18. 2022 Bite size Poem No.40.Poetry Contest Sponsor- Line Gauthier

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/30/2022 8:27:00 AM

I would think so. I hope she came through the wearing of that dress unscathed. Reads like a good contender in the contest to me. Way to go. Sara

Silent One

Date: 3/21/2022 2:33:00 PM

Nice one Valsa!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/20/2022 6:47:00 AM

Hi Valsa, we had one at our wedding 21 years ago, a partner of one of our guests, people could only stare at the ounce that she decided to wear! My husband, was totally unaware, so he said, and didn't care! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/19/2022 8:00:00 PM

The less she wears, the more men stare! Cute limerick, Valsa. Smiles, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/19/2022 5:50:00 AM

It was merely pasted on, I think!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/18/2022 1:50:00 PM

Cute. Too old to be attracted now. :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/18/2022 11:43:00 AM

I have never forgotten the disappointment of a lover who spent a small fortune on a raw silk robe only to hear me say, "take it off; it just gets in the way" . . . . (some of us believe God did alright the first time and enhancement is just an inconvenience) Aloha!