Fascinating Shapes

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They form fascinating shapes in the sky like shapeshifters in a sea of blue, and I love to watch clouds go drifting by. Some seem magical; that's hard to deny, for as they silently slip into view they form fascinating shapes in the sky. Misty fantasies they seem so nearby sculpted in shades of white with a beige hue, and I love to watch them go drifting by. A mind puzzle and a treat for the eye, as chameleon clouds gets reborn anew they form fascinating shapes in the sky. Beyond mesmerizing, they beautify, it's like a parade of dreams traipsing through and I love to watch them go drifting by. A flotilla of skiffs, afloat on high, ordinary, morphs into something new. They form fascinating shapes in the sky, and I love to watch clouds go drifting by.

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 9/4/2022 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest! A fascinating ride reading it! I love the magical beauty you describe with "an armada of skiffs, afloat on high".... :)Paulette

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/4/2022 11:27:00 AM

Thanks, Paulette, clouds are a fascinating ride on a skiff of imagination. I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Terry Miller

Date: 9/3/2022 11:59:00 PM

Fantastic imagery and poem Emile, congratulations on your win.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/4/2022 9:41:00 AM

Thanks, Terry, as always, I both appreciate and welcome your comments my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/2/2022 7:51:00 AM

Congratulations, Emile, for your podium placement with this stunning poem on one of my favorite subjects. Well-deserved. Thank you for entering my contest.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/2/2022 8:19:00 AM

Thanks, Milt, the podium placement is nice, but your comments are valued much more my friend, Emile.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/2/2022 7:48:00 AM

Stunning Emile. The sky is fascinating and with cloudscapes, even more so. Congratulations on your win my friend! Linda

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/2/2022 8:18:00 AM

Thanks, Linda, clouds are fascinating shapeshifters, great for whiling away the hours on a summer's day my friend, Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/10/2022 11:02:00 AM

Hello Emile, I am a cloud watcher to. I love the changing shapes. Sometimes a patch of blue and many sheets of clouds. Loks like ice melting on the blue water. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/10/2022 2:59:00 PM

Hello Emile, I have been watching cluds for a very long time. i never get tired. I enjoy to see the different shapes. Clouds always change thieir shapes. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/10/2022 2:54:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene, sometimes it feels good just to fantasize for a while and get away from the everyday drudgeries of life, I appreciate your comments, have a nice day my friend, Emile.