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Farmer's Labour-Bt

The bend in his back will lend you your food till end
Date: 12/06/2020 Submitted for: Bauk Than-Than Bauk Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Date: 2/15/2021 9:45:00 PM
Well done, Anitha. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/10/2020 1:39:00 AM
is it Than-Bauk? but followed not the appropriate form of Than-Bauk!- whatever expressis is good
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/10/2020 1:50:00 AM
Thank you Mahtab. No, this is reverse Than-Bauk, and for this contest, sponsor wants it this way of rhyming. Have a great day :)
Date: 12/9/2020 3:32:00 PM
Nice write, Ani. I like how this sympathizes with the hard labour of the farmer that allows us to eat. Best wishes in the BT contest ~ John
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/10/2020 1:53:00 AM
John, thank you so much and much appreciate your visit and comment. Truly John, if not for their hard work, our lives will not be this much comfortable. Have a great blessed day.. :)
Date: 12/8/2020 7:21:00 PM
I like it!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/9/2020 5:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim... Hugs :)
Date: 12/7/2020 1:55:00 PM
Such a creative, witty paint, Anitha, with a great message!!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/9/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Newton. Have a great day :)
Date: 12/7/2020 9:59:00 AM
I believe that there are workers out there who through their hard work we have fresh food on our tables. Working in the fields is not easy for I have done it in our garden. It is hard, it is hot and it seems like it won't end when the season begins but it does. Thanks for stopping by my page. Sara
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/9/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara for your valuable comment.. yes their hardwork and toil is something to be much respected. Have a blessed day.. Hugs :)
Date: 12/7/2020 2:15:00 AM
- So true an lovely written, Ani :) - Luck in the contest :) - Have a lovely week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/7/2020 2:42:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Anne. You too enjoy and have a lovely week. Do take care dear friend. Much love n hugs :)

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