Farewell To Her

I grieve a life that can't exist
for things that could not be
of cherished plans that upped and left
of a girl no longer me

I grieve my dreams that slumber on
that I can not wake from sleep
and as another does drift away
for it's emptiness I weep

I mourn the loss of who I was
of possibilities and more
and wave farewell to a life not had
as she walks out through the door

I sit and ache for what is not
for the girl that can't be me
of things that only might have been
for the she that can not be.

Brian Strand's contest 'A first 50 posting' (July 2011)
1st place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Boyle Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 9:44 AM
Beautifully done Emma...worthy of first place win indeed! Bea
Mantle Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 9:53 AM
Many thanks Bea for stopping by my work. Em :)
Sweetheart Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 9:07 AM
Congrats Emma on another grand win with this rare beauty luv..
Taylor Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 7:11 AM
Congrats on 1st Place, Emma. Excellent. Nice going. xxxRalph
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 4:11 AM
Congrats on your win in Brian's contest..Sara
Brown Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 4:09 AM
Congratulationson your win in Brian Strand's "A First 50 Postings" contest Emma. Love, Carol
Castro Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 3:41 AM
omg why why why why must i love your poems so much????????????? seriously i really love your poems!!!!!!!!!!!! your word play is awesome!!!
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