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Farewell To Her

I grieve a life that can't exist for things that could not be of cherished plans that upped and left of a girl no longer me I grieve my dreams that slumber on that I can not wake from sleep and as another does drift away for it's emptiness I weep I mourn the loss of who I was of possibilities and more and wave farewell to a life not had as she walks out through the door I sit and ache for what is not for the girl that can't be me of things that only might have been for the she that can not be. Brian Strand's contest 'A first 50 posting' (July 2011) 1st place

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Date: 7/20/2011 9:44:00 AM
Beautifully done Emma...worthy of first place win indeed! Bea
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Date: 7/20/2011 9:53:00 AM
Many thanks Bea for stopping by my work. Em :)
Date: 7/20/2011 9:07:00 AM
Congrats Emma on another grand win with this rare beauty luv..
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:11:00 AM
Congrats on 1st Place, Emma. Excellent. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 7/20/2011 4:11:00 AM
Congrats on your win in Brian's contest..Sara
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Date: 7/20/2011 4:09:00 AM
Congratulationson your win in Brian Strand's "A First 50 Postings" contest Emma. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2011 3:41:00 AM
omg why why why why must i love your poems so much????????????? seriously i really love your poems!!!!!!!!!!!! your word play is awesome!!!
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