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Had to shorten poem, 7 lines, 8 syllables per line

Farewell, Summer welcome azure September skies; chasing away dry, warm days. Dawdling cool daylight sigh, chill autumn sings, gazing eyes touch a maze of rhythmic brushstrokes. Spoiled frosty air creeps, cloaks a soul of perfection in shadowed shade. 9/9/2019 Poetry Contest : FAREWELL, SUMMER Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud
7 lines, 8 syllables per line

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Date: 9/12/2019 5:05:00 PM
love how beautifully you showed both seasons here, Eve. Wonderful, and congrats on the win
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Date: 9/12/2019 12:45:00 PM
- Goodbye Summer .... and congratulations on your winning poem, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2019 11:54:00 AM
eve, enjoyed the heartfelt tone of your poem, so unique... thanks for taking time to participate as i greet you,' sweet congrats!'..huggs
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Date: 9/12/2019 5:36:00 AM
A well deserved win Eve! Congratulations!;)
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Date: 9/9/2019 3:12:00 PM
"Farewell, Summer welcome azure " I like your opening line...
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Date: 9/9/2019 9:01:00 AM
Lovely said my friend...ready for a win Eve...hope all is well...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 9/9/2019 8:39:00 AM
Splendid work of art... salute and luck alkas
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Date: 9/9/2019 7:48:00 AM
Nicely written, Eve, good luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Date: 9/9/2019 7:19:00 AM
Very nice Eve. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/9/2019 3:13:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/9/2019 1:44:00 AM
Beautiful :) I love it. Good luck and blessings for you.
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