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Farewell My Love

Tears Roll Gently My heart cries As it dies once more My arms go limp as you break free Standing alone with memories and a broken heart I am lost, a pauper without a grave, doing time waiting for Him to call me home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/4/2016 7:36:00 PM
Finally a great Fibonacci! Thank you for actually making sure the syllables are correct. Very heartfelt poem.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/4/2016 8:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Keith
Date: 9/2/2016 1:13:00 PM
A lovely touching Fibonacci, Tim. I am sorry for that heart denied love yet again! Regards // paul
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Date: 9/1/2016 2:58:00 PM
As I was reading your poem I was thinking of my deceased husband.I am standing alone.I miss him a lot I love your poem.I rated it 7
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Date: 9/1/2016 1:30:00 PM
Sad is beautiful always.Lovely write Tim!
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Date: 9/1/2016 1:18:00 PM
Oh Tim I am chocked up by your words:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/1/2016 12:21:00 PM
- Deeply touching, lovely written Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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