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snowman slowly melts body gently disappears features lay on ground 14th December 2014

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Date: 12/22/2014 6:35:00 PM
nothing is forever ... very nice! Lynne
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/22/2014 6:43:00 PM
Oh so true Lynne thanks for dropping by:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/17/2014 3:03:00 AM
beautiful hakiu jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/17/2014 4:34:00 AM
Thanks Liam:-) Hugs jan x
Date: 12/16/2014 3:12:00 PM
Got a chuckle from this one..I feel like the snowman for all my features are getting close to the ground..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/16/2014 3:29:00 PM
I can relate to that - its not just my features lol :-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 12/15/2014 4:11:00 PM
Nobody builds snowmen in Malta! ... no snow ever available. Did manage to build a small one once when we went on Mt Titlis...there snow is present all the year round. // Love your haiku, but feel sorry for your snowman! hugs // paul
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Date: 12/15/2014 4:33:00 PM
We rarely get snow Paul but rest assured no snowman were hurt during the writing of this poem:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/15/2014 3:38:00 PM
oh, jan, this one reminds me exactly of this Xmas decoration I have. It's a snow globe, but when you shake it, nothing happens. YOu just see two eyes and carrot nose of the snowman that melted inside the globe lying at the bottom of the snow globe!!
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Date: 12/15/2014 4:32:00 PM
Gosh that is a bit uncanny Andrea!:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/15/2014 7:07:00 AM
We haven't been able to build a snowman yet :( This winter has been really mild. Poor snowman, cute picture. Hugs xxx
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:33:00 AM
Thanks as ever Cas:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/15/2014 6:17:00 AM
Wow, poor Mr Frosty! It seems he only stays for a little while then disappears this time of the year. We had snow only once this year and I had fun making my little version of a snowman! A mini me! But he too melted, poor snowman! This is a fantastic Haiku my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this morning! What a wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:33:00 AM
Oh Russell it is so great to see you back :-) many thanks for your lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 12/15/2014 5:51:00 AM
lovely Jan we have had no snow yet just a couple of frosts hugs 7
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:32:00 AM
I don't want the snow Shadow - lovely on Christmas cards but in reality its a pain lol:-) hugs
Date: 12/15/2014 4:41:00 AM
Another beautiful Haiku! Another snowman devoured by time! Excellent dear , Jan!
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 12/14/2014 8:26:00 PM
Liquid love -- tears from the children saying goodbye!
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Date: 12/15/2014 1:13:00 AM
aww thanks David:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/14/2014 6:33:00 PM
This is so cool...no pun intended. I loved it Jan!
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Date: 12/15/2014 1:13:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/14/2014 5:52:00 PM
Wow Jan very graphic heavy stuff in pic...Very humorous Jan! lol. lol... Something is up tonight I see a lot of frosty around dead or mangled up in the soup...lol..lots of poets killing or hurting poor Frosty...lol.. R.I.P. poor Frosty! Me have to bring him up somehow, haha.....Excellent pen Jan! I truly enjoy it my dear friend. A 7 for you! :) I want to wish you a very Merry Christmas and your family! Have a great evening! Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 12/15/2014 1:12:00 AM
Thanks Dorian:-) I wrote the poem then wondered if i could find an image lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 12/14/2014 5:32:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku, Jan, Poor snowman.Blessings and Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/14/2014 5:33:00 PM
thanks Eve:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/14/2014 5:28:00 PM
Oh my God was the snowman me, Jan! Was he? He's all white just like me. He's all wet just like me. Look the size of his carrot...just like me. He won't pipe up just like me. Huge dark eyes just like me. He's trying to piss in that hat just like me. What? I have a weak bladder. Have you seen the contest results he got laid just like me. He's in Snow business I'm in show business. All coincidences I think not. Great Haiku Jan I just wish I didn't end up flaccid in the end.
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Date: 12/14/2014 5:32:00 PM
oh heck Maurice I have a weak bladder now from trying not to laugh too loudly at your comment - thanks so much you have made my day - contests pah- think my entries are invisible like the melted snowman at the moment lol:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/14/2014 5:17:00 PM
A sad but happy haiku Jan....the end of the snowman but then it is also the end of winter...hugs Tim
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Date: 12/14/2014 5:30:00 PM
hope we don't get snow then i don't have to build a snowman lol :-) hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/14/2014 4:09:00 PM
Poor snowman. I hope his features were smiling. Sweet Haiku Jan.
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Date: 12/14/2014 4:17:00 PM
We can hope so Brenda:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/14/2014 3:45:00 PM
But memories never melt! Great poem Jan.. How are you friend? I've been mostly on the road for two months and feel like a stranger in the Soup. I've been praying for you and your family, can you soul mail me an update?!
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Date: 12/14/2014 3:56:00 PM
thanks for the comment my friend - will mail you:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/14/2014 3:08:00 PM
Hi Jan, Boo hoo. Bye-bye Mr. Snow. We wish you well in your new form. I didn't read about this is the Daily Mail or in the obituary section of the Press. Thank goodness for Poetry Soup to get the news hot off the press from Jan, one of their top reporters. Nice structure. Sad story. Enjoy the day. Earl
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Date: 12/14/2014 3:10:00 PM
LOl that made me giggle Earl thank you:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/14/2014 2:39:00 PM
An outstanding haiku dear Jan!!!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/15/2014 6:42:00 AM
Hooray..Im so happy for you.: ) Yay!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/14/2014 2:55:00 PM
thanks Charma - the 2 haikus I submitted to that site got accepted last week:-) thanks for the suggestion:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 12/14/2014 2:38:00 PM
Yup, just a carrot and 2 lumps of coal..kind of sad but it made me smile. BG
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Date: 12/14/2014 2:54:00 PM
guess it is sad Barbara:-( Hugs Jan xxx