Premiere Contest WinnerFarewell In Madrid

On a bright broad beach near Barcelona
Where I was feeling so all alone-a
A glorious vision strode into view.
Like Rubirosa, I knew what to do.

I charmed this woman from Segovia,
A fair descendant of the great El Cid.
Her radiant eyes and shimmering hair
Caused many a wag to stammer and stare.

She charged my cardiovascular pump
But in Madrid she tossed me on the dump.
Like a cop she caused cardiac arrest
As my collapsed knees can truly attest.

As I lay in my bed about half dead
This fair lady came with a smile like lead,
Making me feel old and filled with deep dread,
She offered farewell with the words she said,

“You poor lost puppy here is a new leash
For some silly maid to have and to hold.
I must confess I am quite over ya
I’m leaving Madrid for Segovia.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 6:09 PM
Hello David Frowley so nice to meet you. Your better off without her. Enjoy your evening my firend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 1:35 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful trophy David! A deserving win for you. : )
Mcgee Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 9:10 AM
Congrats on your top podium win. Well done.
Gauthier Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 4:57 AM
Well done, David. Congrats on your top win.
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