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Farewell

Italian sonnet Your hand in mine, preparing for goodbye, our eyes are glued upon the other's face. No need for words just yet, we span the space that separates two souls when death is nigh. One final kiss upon your cheek, I sigh, "You go on up ahead to heaven's place and I will join you shortly by God's grace." That said, with nod he waves as I sit by. Weeks later I retreat to quiet grief. Is that a seagull's welcome cry I hear, lamenting hum of foghorn's innate drone? Our fav'rite lighthouse where I seek relief - I've come to scatter ashes from its pier. to sound a hymn for you, for me alone. written 01/19/2012 Sponsor Lisa YY Contest Name FAREWELL theme rhyming contest

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Date: 7/14/2022 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Have a great/blessed day................
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Date: 7/15/2022 6:11:00 PM
I thank you, Paula, for the read and remark. And I appreciate your blessing on today; it was a good day.
Date: 10/23/2016 7:53:00 PM
I can picture the fog coming in and the sadness of the day with every line !! A picture perfect poem ! :) Congratulations!!
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Date: 10/23/2016 7:49:00 PM
This is so very beautiful and touching, Reason. I am glad I found your work. Congrats on your placement. Agnes
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Date: 10/23/2016 10:39:00 AM
Reason-just beautiful...touched my heart deeply...Congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/27/2014 11:38:00 AM
Reason, Congratulations, on your own favorite poem. Stay Xool *xox* Forever LINDA
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Date: 3/21/2014 8:32:00 PM
A great win twice over. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/21/2014 7:19:00 AM
was a pleasure to read your best and favorite poem. Congrats on the win, reason
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Date: 3/11/2012 1:17:00 PM
A tender and beautiful write Reason. A well deserved win in Francine's contest. Congrats! Lay
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Date: 1/27/2012 6:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry. Good job. Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/26/2012 12:14:00 AM
Beautiful poem.Congrats Reason on your 1st place win!
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Date: 1/25/2012 8:41:00 PM
Wow, Francine brought out such beautiful and touching words from so many. Reason, a wonderful congratulations for you first place win, Greg
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:21:00 PM
wow, one of the better sonnets I have read on Soup. Excellent meter, rhyme, imagery and message. It has it all. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/25/2012 8:40:00 AM
congrats Reason on a brilliant first place win luv..
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Francine's ""4 forms 4 themes" contest Reason. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/25/2012 1:43:00 AM
Reason, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 1/24/2012 10:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your writing and your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/24/2012 10:08:00 PM
Congrats this really awesome sonnet..beautiful Gwendolen
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Date: 1/24/2012 9:09:00 PM
congrats on your first place win with this Italian Sonnet, great job
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