Farewell

Italian sonnet

Your hand in mine, preparing for goodbye,
our eyes are glued upon the other's face.
No need for words just yet, we span the space
that separates two souls when death is nigh. 
One final kiss upon your cheek, I sigh,
"You go on up ahead to heaven's place
 and I will join you shortly by God's grace."
That said, with nod he waves as I sit by. 

Weeks later I retreat to quiet grief. 
Is that a seagull's welcome cry I hear, 
lamenting hum of foghorn's innate drone?
Our fav'rite lighthouse where I seek relief -
I've come to scatter ashes from its pier.
to sound a hymn for you, for me alone.


written 01/19/2012

Sponsor	Lisa YY
Contest Name	FAREWELL theme rhyming contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Have a great/blessed day................
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July 15, 2022 at 6:11 PM
I thank you, Paula, for the read and remark. And I appreciate your blessing on today; it was a good day.
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October 23, 2016 at 7:53 PM
I can picture the fog coming in and the sadness of the day with every line !! A picture perfect poem ! :) Congratulations!!
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October 23, 2016 at 7:49 PM
This is so very beautiful and touching, Reason. I am glad I found your work. Congrats on your placement. Agnes
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October 23, 2016 at 10:39 AM
Reason-just beautiful...touched my heart deeply...Congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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March 27, 2014 at 11:38 AM
Reason, Congratulations, on your own favorite poem. Stay Xool *xox* Forever LINDA
Johnson Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 8:32 PM
A great win twice over. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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March 21, 2014 at 7:19 AM
was a pleasure to read your best and favorite poem. Congrats on the win, reason
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March 11, 2012 at 1:17 PM
A tender and beautiful write Reason. A well deserved win in Francine's contest. Congrats! Lay
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January 27, 2012 at 6:42 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry. Good job. Best regards, Jon
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January 26, 2012 at 12:14 AM
Beautiful poem.Congrats Reason on your 1st place win!
Stanley Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Wow, Francine brought out such beautiful and touching words from so many. Reason, a wonderful congratulations for you first place win, Greg
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January 25, 2012 at 6:21 PM
wow, one of the better sonnets I have read on Soup. Excellent meter, rhyme, imagery and message. It has it all. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 8:40 AM
congrats Reason on a brilliant first place win luv..
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 6:13 AM
Congratulations on the win in Francine's ""4 forms 4 themes" contest Reason. Love, Carol
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January 25, 2012 at 1:43 AM
Reason, congrats on your win..David
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January 24, 2012 at 10:16 PM
Congratulations on your writing and your win. Love, Joyce
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January 24, 2012 at 10:08 PM
Congrats this really awesome sonnet..beautiful Gwendolen
Roberts Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 9:09 PM
congrats on your first place win with this Italian Sonnet, great job
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