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Faraway My Angel Awaits - a Wish

Faraway my angel awaits With garland of white flower ; May there be no hindrances When I set out for her. Faraway my angel awaits With roses in her hands ; May there be no disturbances When I set off from the sands. Faraway my angel awaits With love in her heart ; May there be no sorrow When I'll play my part. Faraway my angel awaits With a smile on her lips ; May there be no bereavement When we both embark to ships. Faraway my angel awaits With dreams in her eyes ; And may our story be never fade When we both have died. Note: (I work abroad, I miss my girl. I still remember her words "I'll wait for you" before leaving on a jet plane. I constantly wish May there be no hindrances between us. this is a poem dedicated to her- "May our love be never fade & May this distance never create any trouble. I love you and I miss you." )

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Date: 11/5/2013 11:32:00 PM
This is a lovely tribute to someone very special to your heart. The reader can feel the devotion and care in every line. Nice job Thanks for the nice comment on my poem. I appreciate it
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/16/2013 7:49:00 AM
I also appreciate it. thank you.
Date: 10/13/2013 9:30:00 PM
well done..............SKAT
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/13/2013 9:59:00 PM
thank you.
Date: 10/11/2013 5:25:00 PM
Separation from a loved one is a time of sadness..Great winning entry.Congrats..Sara
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/13/2013 9:59:00 PM
thank you Sara.
Date: 10/11/2013 10:07:00 AM
Kiran, Congrats on your placement in the Songs to Poetry contest! Enjoyed reading again...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/13/2013 10:00:00 PM
thank you again.
Date: 10/10/2013 8:48:00 PM
Kiran, Awesome Songs to Poetry ... congrats~ LINDA
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/10/2013 10:19:00 PM
thanks Linda.
Date: 10/7/2013 8:33:00 PM
gorgeous poem...congrats on your win
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/10/2013 10:18:00 PM
thanks Sandra.
Date: 10/7/2013 7:43:00 PM
May you both always be this much in love. Congrad's on your verse winning! Light & Love
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/7/2013 8:24:00 PM
thank you for that.
Date: 10/6/2013 7:47:00 PM
Wow! That's awesome dear,I say amen to your prayer and wish! Well penned and she will be proud of you when she reads your piece. Kudos! Baron Of Ebullion
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/10/2013 10:18:00 PM
thanks for your lovely comment and prayers.
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/7/2013 8:25:00 PM
thank you.
Date: 10/4/2013 8:51:00 PM
A beautiful dedication, Kiran! I wish the two of you all the best. Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/4/2013 9:02:00 PM
thank you for your love and blessings Rhonda.

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