Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Blitz

Far Through Times

FAR THROUGH TIMES

Moving on
Moving far
Far from pain
Far from you
You pierced my heart
You tore apart
Apart it cry
Apart it bleed
Bleed profusely
Bleed until no more
More to forego
More to arise
Arise living life again
Arise laughing loud again
Again a blossom prime
Again a healthy rhyme
Rhyme magnets warmth
Rhyme striking hearts
Hearts of diamonds
Hearts of fire
Fire dance
Fire hope
Hope ablaze
Hope endless
Endless thoughts
Endless actions
Actions moving man
Actions moving souls
Souls light
Souls blessed
Blessed by love
Blessed of joy
Joy for the world
Joy to the world
World growth
World change
Change views
Change news
News now
News never
Never gets old
Never runs from battle
Battle everyday
Battle of all
All walks of life
All through times
Times writing history
Times with victory
History...
Times...

(c) Olive Eloisa
2:10pm
September 10, 2014

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 23, 2014 at 4:07 AM Olive, sweet, you are brilliant. Love. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 26, 2015 at 8:24 AM thanks much Rajat.. :) this is a late reply from me..

Brenda Meier-Hans September 11, 2014 at 9:10 PM So well done Olive. Awesome Blitz. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 14, 2014 at 3:04 AM Thanks much Brenda..:) GBU

Paul Callus September 11, 2014 at 3:23 PM Another new form, and you tackle it well. Fitting form for one who faces everyday battles! You persevere with learning and it shows heartening results. Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 12, 2014 at 10:18 AM :) thanks much Paul.. I have been reading so many new forms.. But somehow I never one good topic or muse to go with it.. Somehow I see this theme fitting to the poetry type as well as the meaning of blitz.:) lol so this the product..:) thanks much..:) yes been facing so many battles but I'm really just so grateful that I did it with the grace of God..:)

Maurice Yvonne September 10, 2014 at 1:40 PM wonderful work. thank you. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 11, 2014 at 11:30 AM Thanks also..:)

Sara Kendrick September 10, 2014 at 1:21 PM Interesting work..I need to look up Blitz and see what it is about..A new form ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments were uplifting..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 11, 2014 at 11:29 AM Thanks much Sarah I appreciate your visit too..:)

Juli- Michelle September 10, 2014 at 10:10 AM I love this! such wordplay!!! wonderful write, Olive :) Love, Juli-Michelle Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 11, 2014 at 2:13 AM Thanks much Julie..:) I appreciate your drop by..:) GBU

Dr.Ram Mehta September 10, 2014 at 9:33 AM The form attracts. I have yet not tried one, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 11, 2014 at 2:12 AM Try it sir..:) it's quite challenging..:)

Tim Smith September 10, 2014 at 8:43 AM Love the blitz Olive.... Hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 11, 2014 at 1:41 AM Thanks much Tim..:) I appreciate it..:)

Barbara Gorelick September 10, 2014 at 8:33 AM Ive not seen this form very often. I like it and what you have done with it. Good! BG Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 11, 2014 at 1:37 AM Thank you so much BG..:) I appreciate it..:) I first saw this in Debbie's blog and on the examples provided I read and read and tried to know this form..:) this now that I have found a topic for it..:) I hope I did justice to my topic though..

Wole Francis September 10, 2014 at 5:52 AM This is creativity at work. you're very good and talented i have to confess.Lovely concept. cheerssss Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 10, 2014 at 7:07 AM Thanks much..:) GBU

Ma Yaseen September 10, 2014 at 5:35 AM beautifully written Dear olive..... Hope that you are going to be on the winning side of battle always... enjoyed reading it, such a smooth flow in your words.. god bless Friend always Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 10, 2014 at 7:04 AM Thanks much..:) I believe God is with me hence I'll trust that I'll be winning all life's battle..:) GBU