Far From Sorrow - First Published In Beyond Bree May 20112

I remember a comic book 
Wheich said "Welcome to Sorrow's End)
     I belive it was Marvels's "lfquest"
Everybody who has a heart 
  Wants an end to sorrow 
The lands of Middle - Earth are filled with dangers 
and the world as we know it is also filled with dangers
       Every time you dance 
Either physically or on the shores of unreality 
You free yourself from the harsh winds 
  of this mortal realm 
    Hoep is somethign which 
we need now 
    Want to do the springle Ring with the hobbits?
   Want to do some circle dancing or the Watusi?
Well, meet me a 7 sharp at Bilbo's house 
    I hear ther is a party going on......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/19/2012 6:56:00 AM
interesting poem. glad that it was published .
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Date: 5/20/2012 12:33:00 AM
About your poem: A hobbit, you say... I like hobbit parties, except the pipe smoking, and dancing... lol... this comic, is a quest it's self.. I remember the guild that was formed to protect the ring. I can't imagine how dangerous it was around middle earth. To much danger in Bilbo's journey as well.. your poem is amazing.. thank you always for your great poetry... xoxo..PD
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Date: 5/20/2012 12:22:00 AM
Hello, Matt... I have limited my time here on the soup. Only due to all the complications in my life. However, it is always nice to hear from you. I'm very happy to call you a friend. I also appreciate all the mail, it means a lot to me. This way I know you have not forgotten me, due to lack of time I can spend here. Now let me go and read your poem. xox~PD
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Date: 5/16/2012 5:51:00 PM
well, I see how it got published. It's WONDEFUL. I love where you took it at the last line.
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