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Far From Home

Where I wanna be? Should be far from home, Quiet as a dumb man Cute as a Chinese demon Fun like dancing in the rain Cool like a friendly weather Delicious as baked corn High as the mountain of techno I want to lay on my big warm bed With a duvet covering me like a newly created creature. Pools around the room The floor like glasses made of white stones. The bed filled with red pink roses, Massaging my toes. I want to be able to see the sky from where I lay With stars on the bright clouds. Moving towards me. While I close my pretty eyes shaking my head to the beat of ciara's let's dance like we are making love. For a day I want to be by myself Away from my thoughts and problems. Away from you.

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Date: 3/20/2024 11:38:00 PM
"I want to be able to see the sky from where I lay With stars on the bright clouds. " You have created a dream-like ambiance. May you find such a cozy place to enjoy. Your images are so striking.
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Tonye George
Date: 3/21/2024 5:47:00 AM
Thank you dear Valsa
Date: 11/20/2017 7:30:00 PM
Interesting write. Could use a little bit more uniform form.
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Tonye George
Date: 11/3/2020 3:19:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 11/7/2017 9:28:00 AM
Interesting. Your writing feels so free. Your images are stunning. "High as the mountain of techno" is a great example. Thanks for sharing............peace!
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Tonye George
Date: 11/3/2020 3:19:00 AM
Awww! Thank you
Date: 10/16/2017 2:47:00 PM
You can not run away from your problems. No one can. Have a nice day my friend.
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