Far From Home

Where I wanna be?
                
        Should be far from home,
        Quiet as a dumb man
        Cute as a Chinese demon
        Fun like dancing in the rain
        Cool like a friendly weather
        Delicious as baked corn
        High as the mountain of techno

I want to lay on my big warm bed
With a duvet covering me like a newly created creature. 
         Pools around the room
The floor like glasses made of white stones. 
   The bed filled with red pink roses,
Massaging my toes. 

I want to be able to see the sky from where I lay
With stars on the bright clouds. 
  Moving towards me. 
While I close my pretty eyes shaking my head to the beat of ciara's let's dance like we are making love. 

           For a day I want to be by myself 
        Away from my thoughts and problems. 
           Away from you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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George Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 11:38 PM
"I want to be able to see the sky from where I lay With stars on the bright clouds. " You have created a dream-like ambiance. May you find such a cozy place to enjoy. Your images are so striking.
George Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 5:47 AM
Thank you dear Valsa
Williams Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 7:30 PM
Interesting write. Could use a little bit more uniform form.
George Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 3:19 AM
Thank you
Evans Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 9:28 AM
Interesting. Your writing feels so free. Your images are stunning. "High as the mountain of techno" is a great example. Thanks for sharing............peace!
George Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 3:19 AM
Awww! Thank you
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 2:47 PM
You can not run away from your problems. No one can. Have a nice day my friend.
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