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Far Away Rain

Subtle thoughts of yesterday rumble
in every dancing bolt of energy
across the sacrificial sky

Tepid droplets of moisture awaken
senses once lost and lonely
seeking to breathe another day

Thunder rings loudly 
(or is that your heart?)
in a far away cloud
calling out my name

Water falling down  gently
eyes and hands wide open
catching every part of you



Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/7/2016 8:26:00 AM
Very brilliant write. Tim you did a good job here. A big 7 from me..............//hugs
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Date: 10/7/2016 1:14:00 AM
Very romantic Tim. Beautiful /|\
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Date: 10/6/2016 3:57:00 PM
This is beautiful Tim! Love "Subtle thoughts" and "senses once lost" Kudos from far away:)
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Chris..
Date: 10/6/2016 3:39:00 PM
Really well done, I give you thunderous applause!! :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 3:43:00 PM
lol...thanks Arthur
Date: 10/6/2016 1:56:00 PM
This is one of your most beautiful ones...I really find it mesmerizing.A fave.
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Date: 10/6/2016 2:07:00 PM
Thanks so much Charma. a fav : )...I was inspired by the warm rain. Made me feel like dancing.
Date: 10/6/2016 1:51:00 PM
- Beautiful and romantic, Tim - Love it - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 2:04:00 PM
Thanks A-L
Date: 10/6/2016 12:55:00 PM
Awesome, Tim, this really has a lot of sentiment in your descriptions one of your very best. Hugs
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 1:04:00 PM
Oh thank you dear friend.
Date: 10/6/2016 12:39:00 PM
All under the umbrella of your love. Very romantic, Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 12:43:00 PM
Thank you DT my friend.
Date: 10/6/2016 12:37:00 PM
wow, this is beautiful, tim!
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 12:40:00 PM
Thank you so very much Ilene.
Date: 10/6/2016 11:41:00 AM
This is beautiful, it reaches out and touches the heart. I like how the rain becomes her love, the thunder her heartbeat and the lightening(assumption) the spark that illuminates your world. Really nicely done.
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Date: 10/6/2016 11:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris. Welcome to PS.