Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Far Away Rain

Subtle thoughts of yesterday rumble
in every dancing bolt of energy
across the sacrificial sky

Tepid droplets of moisture awaken
senses once lost and lonely
seeking to breathe another day

Thunder rings loudly 
(or is that your heart?)
in a far away cloud
calling out my name

Water falling down  gently
eyes and hands wide open
catching every part of you

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Manmath Dalei October 7, 2016 at 8:26 AM Very brilliant write. Tim you did a good job here. A big 7 from me..............//hugs

White Wolf October 7, 2016 at 1:14 AM Very romantic Tim. Beautiful /|\

Chris Hagy October 6, 2016 at 3:57 PM This is beautiful Tim! Love "Subtle thoughts" and "senses once lost" Kudos from far away:) Tim Smith October 6, 2016 at 4:20 PM Thank you Chris..

Arthur Vaso October 6, 2016 at 3:39 PM Really well done, I give you thunderous applause!! :) Tim Smith October 6, 2016 at 3:43 PM lol...thanks Arthur

Charmaine Chircop October 6, 2016 at 1:56 PM This is one of your most beautiful ones...I really find it mesmerizing.A fave. Tim Smith October 6, 2016 at 2:07 PM Thanks so much Charma. a fav : )...I was inspired by the warm rain. Made me feel like dancing.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 6, 2016 at 1:51 PM - Beautiful and romantic, Tim - Love it - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :) Tim Smith October 6, 2016 at 2:04 PM Thanks A-L

Eve Roper October 6, 2016 at 12:55 PM Awesome, Tim, this really has a lot of sentiment in your descriptions one of your very best. Hugs Tim Smith October 6, 2016 at 1:04 PM Oh thank you dear friend.

Daniel Turner October 6, 2016 at 12:39 PM All under the umbrella of your love. Very romantic, Tim. Tim Smith October 6, 2016 at 12:43 PM Thank you DT my friend.

Ilene Bauer October 6, 2016 at 12:37 PM wow, this is beautiful, tim! Tim Smith October 6, 2016 at 12:40 PM Thank you so very much Ilene.

Chris Green October 6, 2016 at 11:41 AM This is beautiful, it reaches out and touches the heart. I like how the rain becomes her love, the thunder her heartbeat and the lightening(assumption) the spark that illuminates your world. Really nicely done. Tim Smith October 6, 2016 at 11:48 AM Thank you so much Chris. Welcome to PS.