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Far Away Close Up Right beside me in the car, but not here at all. Are you with her? Who is she? Do I care? Should I, would it matter? No. I ride along in quiet. Thinking of nothing, but the desert... passing by, not for the first time, certainly not for the last. Dreams now gone, the way of all dust. Blown from the path, to be picked up by others, and then re-lived. Repeating the same disasters, the same arguments in unison, casting doubts on the very term... "ever after". Prince charming, the beast... more like the mouse, without a house. Humans lie. It is a talent that sets up apart, from the animals, that swing from trees. But not by much, as they also throw waste at each other, and touch at the wrong times. Like dung beetles, greedy to climb aboard. Soon, we will not have to speak again. We will both be free, to live lives apart. But she will find, you are not, a cherry tart, as first supposed.

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Date: 1/6/2020 11:47:00 AM
Wow, Wow, Wow, Wow!!! Just breathe taking and also a "FAV" for me. Endearing verse... Write On James
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Ann Foster
Date: 1/6/2020 3:14:00 PM
You are ever so kind my friend. God Bless your New Year and give you every blessing. Ann
Date: 1/6/2020 9:40:00 AM
Interesting write my friend - enjoy the sincerity of your poetry. Have watched a dung beetle at work in the Kruger National park, industrious insects. Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 1/6/2020 3:13:00 PM
Yes...she was. At Christmas, in front of my friend. It was her pile of X. So very sad. Yet, she looks great, having lost 220 pounds of excess...excess. Life is better in truth, and Light, not darkness. I need to lay off the coffee, or go write another poem. Hugs. Too much crazy today. Hugs. Ann
Date: 1/5/2020 9:23:00 PM
I smiled all the way through this and I plan to reread it often. A fave for me.
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Ann Foster
Date: 1/5/2020 9:37:00 PM
Thank you friend. I answered your mail... good luck tomorrow. Ever your kind comments make my days. Ann

Book: Shattered Sighs