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Far Away: the Heart's Craving

I thought of “Far Away” as an escaping, wild trees and flowers in all their rapt fury. To be free of love and all its stiff draping, fleeing dark emotions in a swift hurry. Now I see bright orchids in their wild scaping, shades of magenta, aqua and snow flurries. But suitcases hold Things, not a heavy heart. I must retrace my steps, begin at the start of where it all went wrong, damage of colors not our own. The inks and umbers invading our love's pastel sanctity, bringing dolor to what was once a chartreuse-golden shading of sunshine and jade meadows, not the pallor introduced by shadowy words evading questions asked. Love's creations are worth saving. I must return home, to sate the heart's craving. 4th Place Far Away Contest 7/7/17

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Date: 8/1/2017 10:22:00 PM
Congratulations Dale on the placement of the contest. A beautiful rispetto.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/2/2017 9:34:00 AM
Thanks very much, Nayda!
Date: 7/6/2017 12:15:00 PM
Anther fantastic piece from you my friend. There is always so much to find when reading your work, it is like an adventure for me. I learn so much from you. I really enjoyed this heart felt journey and especially the suitcase line. Often returning home is the best course to take. Nicely done Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/6/2017 12:19:00 PM
Gosh, Chris, thank you very much!
Date: 7/6/2017 10:19:00 AM
I've always heard,"Home is where the heart is" Great write, Dale I love the images this poem conjures while reading:)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/6/2017 10:33:00 AM
Thanks very much, Daniel.
Date: 7/5/2017 5:54:00 PM
Excellent Dale! Sounds like it could be a wonderful decision to return home :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/5/2017 6:00:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi!

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