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06/12/25

Song II  Benjamin Franklin ...Far Away  ..with Scooter Ward ..

14 th place

Contest by Rob Carmack

Take me for away I'm at end of my way, that started from birth on mother Earth ! Now almost at point of death : Waiting for my last breath. Now to venture far away Show me light, I pray. Left my happiness Future is hopeless. Left my pain and sorrow After Life is waiting for tomorrow Yes , I know I'm going far away very soon, no more delay On Earth seen heaven and hell Now to respond on last bell No scope to turn back I'm bound to follow my pre-scheduled track. Senses are choked floating in unconscious waves getting entry to after life phase to explore an unknown zone.

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