Fantasy Terzanelle Questionku

It starts as a simple thought
that echoes in the brain 
waiting for idealism sought

Idealism starts the process train
that brings forth the  fantasy 
that echoes  in the brain

To fantasise is to be free
to imagine to feel totally
That brings forth the fantasy

to escape life's reality
no holding back the desire
to imagine to feel  totally

I fantasise about the burning fire
imagining it within me
no holding back the desire

No longer afraid, because you  see
it starts as a simple thought
imagining it within me
waiting for idealism sought

Lips touching lips
Hands pulling off clothes...
Ted's ear off, ring bearwatch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A  Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 11:51 AM
Seren, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 5:43 PM
thanks Skat .......Seren
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January 12, 2013 at 3:21 AM
Smashing write Seren, and big congratulations on your winning spot once more my friend xx
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 6:44 AM
Thank you Mandy...Seren
Tsiluma Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 1:31 AM
Very nice!!! I love the build up and the aftermath. simple thought - powerful actions. Congrats on your win!
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 6:58 AM
Thank you Vicky didnt find this an easy one.. Seren.
Nair Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 12:44 AM
Congratulations, Seren, With short lines and the refrains syncing well eveywhere, and ending with a passionate questionku, it is simply a great write. !! Jag
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 6:59 AM
Thanks Jag for your congrats ....Seren
A   Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 9:50 PM
Seren.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 6:59 AM
Thank you PD
Guzzi Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 7:58 PM
Congrads on your win Light & Love
Roberts Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 9:12 PM
Thanks Debbie. ...Seren
Lamoureux Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 7:13 PM
Congratulations, I enjoyed your poems. Thanks for entry.
Roberts Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 9:14 PM
Thank you Richard ......Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 9:07 PM
way to edit girl. soup xx
Andresen Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 1:16 PM
Sweet, fantasy Seren. - Luck in contest. - Wishing you a peaceful and lovely Christmas! (welcome to visit my Christmas poem) Biiig hug / / Anne-Lise :)
Roberts Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 5:45 AM
Thank you Anne Lise
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