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Fantasy Eye Land

Their eyes met briefly She giggled He smiled at her Her nose she wiggled She smiled back His hips he swiveled He removed his shirt Abs revealed, perfectly chiseled She threw back a mane of hair Her ample chest, it jiggled… Sparks of electricity fairly bristled ~ Just then was heard a low wolf-whistle

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Date: 5/2/2022 11:13:00 AM
So much activity here, and it happened so fast, I had to re-read it!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/2/2022 11:55:00 AM
How about that wolf-whistle, eh?! ~ Whistler's Brother
Date: 4/30/2022 8:35:00 PM
That was an eyeful! Love the title too :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/30/2022 8:44:00 PM
I'm kinda glad you wrote 'eyeful' instead of 'awful.' There's a little of both in what I wrote, methinks. Thanks, Michelle.
Date: 4/29/2022 11:19:00 AM
Hello Gershon, yes they were attracted to each other. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/4/2022 10:29:00 AM
Hello Gershon, They will be happy together. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/30/2022 8:43:00 PM
They certainly were attracted to each other, Darlene. Thank you for your visit! :)
Date: 4/29/2022 10:17:00 AM
I'd say they had sooommmmeeee chemistry!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/30/2022 8:43:00 PM
I think their chemistry caused an explosion in their high school chemistry lab. :)

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