Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Fantasy Eye Land

Their eyes met briefly 
  She giggled

He smiled at her
  Her nose she wiggled

She smiled back
  His hips he swiveled

He removed his shirt
  Abs revealed, perfectly chiseled 

She threw back a mane of hair
  Her ample chest, it jiggled…

Sparks of electricity fairly bristled ~
  Just then was heard a low wolf-whistle

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Caren Krutsinger May 2, 2022 at 11:13 AM So much activity here, and it happened so fast, I had to re-read it! Gershon Wolf May 2, 2022 at 11:55 AM How about that wolf-whistle, eh?! ~ Whistler's Brother

Michelle Faulkner April 30, 2022 at 8:35 PM That was an eyeful! Love the title too :) Gershon Wolf April 30, 2022 at 8:44 PM I'm kinda glad you wrote 'eyeful' instead of 'awful.' There's a little of both in what I wrote, methinks. Thanks, Michelle.

Darlene De Beaulieu April 29, 2022 at 11:19 AM Hello Gershon, yes they were attracted to each other. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu May 4, 2022 at 10:29 AM Hello Gershon, They will be happy together. Enjoy your day my friend. Gershon Wolf April 30, 2022 at 8:43 PM They certainly were attracted to each other, Darlene. Thank you for your visit! :)

L Milton Hankins April 29, 2022 at 10:17 AM I'd say they had sooommmmeeee chemistry! Gershon Wolf April 30, 2022 at 8:43 PM I think their chemistry caused an explosion in their high school chemistry lab. :)