Fantasy Escape (Senryu)
World of Walt Disney
The day after Thanksgiving
Shoulder to shoulder
© Joseph 11/23/07
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Author’s Comments: The Japanese Senryu format has three lines as follows:
the first has five syllables, the second seven syllables, and the third five
syllables. The pattern is 5/7/5 for a total of seventeen syllables. The Senryu is
about an emotional expression, human nature, and things in the human realms
which maybe satiric or humorous.
Copyright © Joseph Spence Sr | Year Posted 2007
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