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11/23/2024 for You live in a fantasy world Poetry Contest sponsored by Eve Roper

 

Welcome, pretty dear. I'm so glad that you're here in our bright fantasy land. You have unique charms, two legs, two arms, and five darling digits on each hand. Thank you, Mister Fly. I too, am glad I dropped by - My, what a nice coat of blue. Shall we spend an hour on a flower, then go flying, admiring the view?

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Date: 12/13/2024 10:57:00 AM
So sweet and clever, a cute conversation between species! Xo
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David Crandall
Date: 12/13/2024 11:09:00 AM
haha, thanks Crystol, flies have interesting things to say! :-)
Date: 12/13/2024 5:53:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Nice fairy tale that is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 12/13/2024 9:12:00 AM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 12/13/2024 4:29:00 AM
- Great poem for Eve's painting, David :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 12/13/2024 9:12:00 AM
Merry Christmas and thanks, Anne-Lise! :-)
Date: 12/12/2024 11:21:00 AM
David, congratulations on your win! I love the conversational tone like two children spinning wishes! Cheers and blessings!
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David Crandall
Date: 12/12/2024 12:23:00 PM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate your comment!
Date: 11/23/2024 8:34:00 PM
Beauty is everywhere. This is a nice equity poem.
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David Crandall
Date: 11/23/2024 9:20:00 PM
Interesting perspective!
Date: 11/23/2024 12:01:00 PM
Unique! Commonplace, the hands, feet and fingers, but not to be taken for granted. And a fly becomes the darling here.
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David Crandall
Date: 11/23/2024 3:03:00 PM
Haha, flies have a strange perspective.

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