''Fantasy Dreaming''

 
~ ~ What will my fantasy dreamt be, while dreaming? My soul vulnerable, uncovered, open, revealed, So many sweet places kept secret from the living. Dreams, I keep hidden in a box and sealed, I push myself past the mist, the clouds and haze, My soul vulnerable, uncovered, open, revealed. My fantasy lover, beautiful with his eyes ablaze, It is the night, deep with velvet rich darkness, I push myself past the mist, the clouds and haze. I am but a lonely girl drifting in eternal deepness, Touching the sky is easy for this seeking dreamer, It is the night, deep with velvet rich darkness. He strokes my black hair and winds in his finger, Withdrawing my cloak, my damp tangled hair falls, Touching the sky is easy for this seeking dreamer. Then, I have wings as another fantasy dream calls, Withdrawing my cloak, my damp tangled hair falls. What will my fantasy dreamt be, while dreaming? So many sweet places kept secret from the living. ~ ~ _______________________________ December 13, 2012 Terzanelle Submitted to the contest, Villanelle and Terzanelle Only Sponsor, Shadow Hamilton Second Place
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Nunez Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 8:20 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your great win, Broken!
A  Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 1:35 AM
Hi Broken, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
A   Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 12:50 AM
a stunning win. Love Linda
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 9:13 PM
this is a REAL fantasy poem and a fantastic one at that! Great win, Constance, And well deserved.
Wigley Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 8:49 PM
You really are very, very good at this, BW. Congratulations on your win. Viv x
Lamoureux Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 8:41 PM
I so enjoyed your winning poem.
Guzzi Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 8:24 PM
Congrad's on your win, it is so true sometimes the dream is most real & far better than the reality of things? BIG HUGS Light & Love
Allison Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 5:45 PM
I loved this broken wings - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 5:19 PM
B.W. such a wonderful write. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve * @-)--< 7
Hamilton Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 12:21 PM
superb poem Connie congrats on your win hugs
Dom Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 12:12 AM
A surreal sensuality. Quite the terzanelle. Nicely done.
Roberts Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 6:16 PM
this is lovely Constance, best of luck in the contest, kiss the kitty for me
Gifford Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Ah, a fantasy lover, how romantic. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Darlene
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 4:22 AM
WOW WOW WOW - soupmail! Hugs jan xxx Good luck in the contest this will fly:-) xx hugs jan xx 7
Sathasivam Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 1:54 AM
Excellent. Well versed and beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Leiser Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 10:27 PM
THis is such an interesting and powerful form of poetry to me. Your words weave a fantastical dream like state, very well done! Good luck in the contest, BR :)
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