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Fantasy Blues Thang

Come here,baby! Join me on this dance floor I know you want me, just too afraid to show it. Come here, baby! Let's sway, oooh..I know how you want to play. In the most sensuous of ways. Get real, close, I am not afraid To play in your wild, jungle ways.  Sinner man, you, it shines from those glaring, deep eyes. It's overtime night, you, me And whatever honey comes our way. Just gotta be real, so, baby. What do you say? July 8, 2019 11am PST This poem mimics the great Blues music of the USA. It is not meant to be read as autobiographical. Earthiness,as in the Blues, frightens some people. Panagiota

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Date: 7/9/2019 5:23:00 PM
Perfect for setting to music; I'll grab my guitar and you sing the words.
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Date: 7/9/2019 5:53:00 PM
Great idea.. I used to play guitar and am a fearless singer. Love to perform. Performing Arts is my speciality, Panagiota
Date: 7/9/2019 12:24:00 AM
I like the "wild jungle ways" . You are a poet after my own heart!
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Date: 7/9/2019 12:32:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. I am far from a wild thang. Shakespeare was not all the characters in his plays either. I am wild in terms of being a free, very free spirit. No way Puritannical or hunting down evil sinners. Our society is quite abnormal, but nobody made me Pope! LOL. Churches are good and also have some self righteous folks not Christ like. Panagiota..so happy you got the POTD,))
Date: 7/8/2019 5:09:00 PM
Cute!
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Date: 7/8/2019 11:44:00 PM
Thanks, Kim Panagiota
Date: 7/8/2019 4:36:00 PM
Dropping all pretenses... Love it. Nice one. :) gw
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Date: 7/9/2019 1:57:00 AM
Probably never will write a bluesy thing again Panagiota
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Date: 7/8/2019 10:49:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon...never wrote a bluesy thing before. Panagiota
Date: 7/8/2019 2:56:00 PM
Wowzer, this one steamed up my glasses. ;0)
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Date: 7/8/2019 3:10:00 PM
ROFLMAO~Richard. Better wipe them off. I can't stop laughing, thanks to you. Panagiota xx Did you ever hear the song, Mannish Boy, by Muddy Waters? It's the first blues song I ever heard
Date: 7/8/2019 2:12:00 PM
A sensuous titillating poem - penned with imagery which brings this poem to life! Liked this poem! Great write Panagiota. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 7/8/2019 2:22:00 PM
Jenn~ it is as described. I wish I could turn this into a song. Blues are quite cool. Janis Joplin sang some blues.. Weather beautiful here today, hope same for you. Thank you for being the very first commentor on this one. -))

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