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Fantastic Free-Verse

I have always loved to write 
real…romantic rhymes
but now I have to feel free to 
form a fantastic freeverse
with my creative caps on and my 
pleasant pen and pad
I am doing this, drawing words 
from the well of wild words.
To flow in this fabulous fountain,
all I need are tender tools;
Witty words, rare rhymes and 
some lovely lyrics,
adding the flavour
 of impressive 
imageries, just to cruise 
in the cart of creativity.
Playing with words and using 
originality as my errand boy,
I dare to ramble and fumble but 
never rumple my art's artillery
keeping each line lovely, lively, 
meaningful and readable.
I patronize punctuations 
just to paint 
a perfect poem with the pen of 
passion.
Poetry is all about what you have 
to write and how you write it;
where and when you write it 
does not really matter… at all
So I just felt free to 
write a fantastic free verse in the 
fountain filled with fragrant 
flowers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/5/2012 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win Adeleke. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2012 11:02:00 PM
Did I coax you into entering this poem because I matched its name so perfectly ;)? I enjoyed your poem very much, but it is an old poem and I asked for new ones, so I had to give it only an honourable mention! I love the constant use of alliteration.  -KMD
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Adeleke in John Freeman's contest "Your Free Verse Precept" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Adeleka! Enjoy! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:58:00 AM
Nicely done, Adeleke. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:35:00 AM
I see this verse was written for Catie's Contest Adeleke, at lease originally, it seems! However Congratulations on your place and thanks for your support. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contetst, Adeleke
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:07:00 AM
Congrats Adeleke on your super win in John's contest with these great words so poignant my friend... enjoy sweet success this happy Sunday with luv...
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Date: 7/15/2010 9:22:00 PM
oh, you didn't make the deadline,I see. I enjoyed this very much. LUv, "mom"
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Date: 7/15/2010 9:30:00 AM
Soup Mail :)
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