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Fantastic four

A genuine hero isn't one that's flawless     
Arguably not the one garmented with 
Absolute forfeits but one who is purely 
Accountable in securing relationships 
Amiably without trade of another life.

Fantastically feeding through the
Flickering lengths of surfaces
Flawlessly demonstrating, yet exploring the
Fatal ends of the earth
Formulated with his hands.
Firmly confronting unknown demons with
Frictions slipping through the gutters
Flourished and aided by true
Friendship with an unending ink. 
                      Mr. Fantastic.'

Invisibly sewing through the storm
It's amazing how universal laws
Illuminates patterns bearing geniuses.
Intrepidly matched with foxes and foes
Incognito, still dooming through the runs
Inexorable the heiress that jogs through walls
Infallibly without a pause for blockages.
                     'The Invisible Woman.'

Humbly joining the waves in a path
Haven to show light in reflection of
Hazardous challenges and adventures
Hurtful exposures but the 
'Human touch' burns through
Heartily thrives not drowning in power
Havoc stricken but banked on 
Hopelessly sticking to what's better than potatoes.
Family!
                     'The Human Touch.'

The Thing that Grimm's do is
Tactfully take souls to the other world full of
Turbulence but he possesses a crushing strength
Tenaciously draws the souls back to life
Triumphant discoveries without boundaries
Topped against gravity and human deposition 
The sailors enemy isn't the dreadful
Tenebrous storms but the ignorance and absence of
Tough likeminds that can generate a tunnel.
                    'The Thing.' 

A fantastic four!

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Date: 12/16/2023 7:28:00 AM
Tonye, this is a really fun write, and to use the alliteration form is a brilliant touch. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 12/14/2023 10:00:00 AM
You must be a fantastic four fan? You really have described them in such an insightful manner. I especially love the opening here.and how every stanza you’ve focused on a specific letter giving an alliterative touch is very impressive to read. Congratulations on your win too; i loved this
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Tonye George
Date: 12/14/2023 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Ink. Congratulations on your win hun.
Date: 12/5/2023 7:06:00 PM
Gosh, you've described me to a "T" and we don't even know each other. Are you psychic or what? Dang. Seriously though this was a fun read
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Tonye George
Date: 12/5/2023 8:51:00 PM
You definitely have so many amazing personalities. I become a psychic twice in every week. Thank you for the support tom.

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