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Veien, Skogen, Sesong, Høst, Landskap

- Fanfare - Pleiades F -

Fall are glowing of gold

Flooding of nice colors  

Flutter neurotic leaves 
 
Fruitful trees with apples 

Frost on the creek at night 
 
Foretaste of the winter  

Flashbacks ... summer pleasures











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Each line has 6 syllables
(poem in the Pleiades form)
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
23.09.2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Petersen Potter Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 7:56 PM
Very beautiful Pleiades Fanfare Anne- Lise! Beautifully painted piece dear friend.I enjoyed it!:)) Just awesome!A 7! Sending you my love and prayers! The best to you always!Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs! D.
Andresen Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 2:52 AM
- Thank you Dorian, very much appreciate your visit a 7 and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 5:20 PM
A wonderful poem, Sunshine Smile. The imagery of words matching photo is very creative. Gives the reader a nice visual picture in their mind. An excellent write. Love and peace from the RW (Romantic Warrior.)
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 4:03 AM
- Thank you, very much appreciate your visit and comments, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 3:17 AM
Full of fascination and beauty in all images and words/writes my dear friend, Anne Lise! This is one of my most favorites among the entries. You did it very well too. Many warm congrats from me! Have a nice weekend! love lots and hugs, Leonora
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 4:05 AM
- Dear Leonora, thank you for the lovely comments, congrats and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 4:25 PM
A most delightful Pleiades, Anne-Lise, autumn beautifully tucked between summer and winter! Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 6:41 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 3:46 PM
Really well done congratulations on your win with this fine entry!
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 1:23 PM
- Armand, thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 3:06 PM
beautiful images. Congrats on your win.
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 1:22 PM
- Andrea, thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 2:10 PM
Anne-Lise, a lovely fall write. I especially like the line about neurotic leaves. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 1:24 PM
- A pleasure to participate Kim :) - Thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Congrats on your win Sunshine...
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 1:22 PM
- Joseph, thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Great to see this on the winners list:) congratulations, Anne-lise:)
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 1:22 PM
- Jo, thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Quigley Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Very nicely done--fall is in the air...
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 4:20 AM
- Thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 4:19 AM
- Jan, thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 4:45 PM
Congrats on your placement with this lovely fall poem, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 4:19 AM
- Agnes, thanks for visiting and congrats - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Tanwar Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 1:13 PM
very nicely written....sooo gooood
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 4:18 AM
- Thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Manu - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Muideen Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 12:25 PM
I love it when I read nature poem. Thank you for posting my friend........A.M.
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 4:17 AM
- Afolabi, thanks for your visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 7:17 AM
Excellent and beautiful write depicting the best of nature. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Andresen Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 8:13 AM
- Thank you, very much appreciate your visit and comments, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 10:52 PM
you make autumn such a colorful, beautiful season,anne... this is pretty!..huggs
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 2:55 AM
- We've had a lot of sun in recent weeks, Nette :) - Thank you, very much appreciate your visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Fall pleasures with this poem Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 2:54 AM
- Many thanks, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rycroft Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 1:22 PM
A colorful great picture x well done x
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 2:52 AM
- Thank you, very much appreciate your visit and comments, Wendy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Singh Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Lovely ! Good Luck!
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 8:49 AM
- Many thanks, Sushma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 7:38 AM
Fantastic write about Nature:)
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 8:48 AM
- Jo, greatly appreciate your words :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Delightful writing depicting nature at its best dear, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 8:47 AM
- A pleasure you like it, lovely comments from you Demetrios - Thank you my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 6:59 AM
A simple delight. Glad you are still posting. Best wishes David
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 8:46 AM
- Many thanks, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Very nice Pleiades Sunshine...best wishes
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 8:45 AM
- Thank you, very much appreciate your visit and comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Love it as it so describes the season at the moment. You are my last comment as I have to make supper. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 8:44 AM
- Dear Phyllis, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 1:29 PM
A beautiful fanfare - the imagery is wonderful! Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 3:20 PM
- When the sun shines and colors sparkles ... it's beautiful, Jan :) - We've had a lot of sun in recent weeks - Thank you, very much appreciate your visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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