Fancy's Flight

A lass named Fancy found herself forlorn, for in her world, the hues like gray and brown prevailed, so Fancy wanted to adorn herself with colors: boredom weighed her down! Her people shunned bright objects and deplored the colors’ burst of rainbows in their sky. However, such rare arches she adored, so Fancy wished for wings that she might fly. . . She sat and pondered; then a feathered quill came drifting down; she wrote, and poetry sprang forth! With joy, her heart began to fill as imagery replaced monotony! Though Fancy wore no wings, she FELT them there; She realized no longer would she thirst for beauty, for her words soared through the air. That flight of fancy came with colors’ burst! Written 5/19/14 by Andrea Dietrich for the Imagination Contest of Dave Wood
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Nau Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 12:42 AM
Grok this! Beautifully done and so delightful both in the adventure told and the colorful words in your pallet! Enjoyed this very much! ~Paint On~ Edlynn
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 5:18 AM
This is so heartwarming Andrea. Your imagination soars! Congratulations on your first place in the contest!
Sharma Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 11:43 PM
Beautiful:)
Lindley Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 7:25 PM
Amazing write and great win.. Congrats!!!!!!!!!!
A   Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 6:26 PM
nice win Andrea...PD
Stephens Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Congrats Andrea on coming 1st in both contests. Expertly constructed and a delight to read. Regards Theresa xx
Gasun Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 12:25 PM
An imagination which seems came into real with your very creative words my very dear friend Andrea. Thank u so much for sharing and big warm congratulations on this shining win and the other recent wins as well! Many, many hugs and cheers! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Onclaud Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 10:25 AM
a dreamy personification of fancy, andie... for this amazing poem, my sweet congrats and huggs
Callus Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Very creative...as usual your faithful muse hovers lovingly by your side! Love your flight of fancy and the imagery. Congrats on a deserved top winning spot! // paul
Hamilton Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 7:03 AM
enjoyed rereading this Andrea congrats on 1st place hugs
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 3:20 AM
:) I imagine a painter on 2nd stanza while on the last I imagine one poet..:) words soared through the air..:D!!! Funny but well it does for us who loves poetry..:)Congratulations Andrea!!!!!! GBU
Allison Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 2:29 AM
Fabulous write Andrea congrats on your top spot. Hugs Jan xxx
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 12:10 AM
A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, Andrea
Smith Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 11:45 PM
Stopping back with a congratulatory hug...
A. Sharma Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:13 PM
Wonderful write Andrea ! Imagination shines,, very creative worth top win ! Huge congrats !
Parker Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:13 PM
Congratulations Andrea, a poem filled with fancy imagination, well deserved win
Roberts Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 9:29 PM
Andrea this is such a good poem, congrats. U deserve the top spot....Seren
Richards Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 8:34 PM
Poetry releases Fancy! NICE!
Mohammed Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Impressive poem Andrea. Thanks for all your wonderful comments on my poems in the past. It was indeed a pleasure to receive your kind encouraging words.
Deschler Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 8:21 PM
I feel like I know her! You did a marvelous job with the imagination theme. Very clever, Andrea! I wouldn't be surprised to see this poem at the top of the winner's list! Good luck to you!.... Thank you for the kind congrats, by the way.
Sirak Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 5:42 AM
Now this is a true flight of imagination, soaring high. You will be in the winner's circle again.
Carrillo Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 11:16 AM
Great imaginary on this one. I liked it. It will do great in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Many blessings... Lucilla
Lamoureux Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 7:11 AM
Wowzy, wow, wowzer! I absolutely love this one. You Rock Andrea.
Hamilton Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 5:48 AM
what a wondrous flight of fancy Andrea it will do well gl in contest hugs
Watson Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 5:45 AM
Flows like French wine in Paris as usual.
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