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Fan Tastic

FAN-TASTIC The fan spins on the ceiling, Like a robin’s wings, it flutters. Casting soft, spinning shadows On white, wood-window shutters. Does it know, how lovely it is? The calico cat enjoys its coolness. The dainty pull-chains nod...yes! As the fresh cool air, it happily pushes. A fan, so greatly unappreciated. Yet it serves us day and night. It just does its job, with all its might. Just a fan~~simple, unsophisticated! 6-16-2022 ~2~

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Date: 6/19/2022 10:19:00 AM
Had our standing one going the past few nights, they are a godsend. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/19/2022 2:57:00 PM
Hey Tom...where I live it’s year round))) I can’t be in a room where A fan or fans are not moving the air...The ceiling ones can be set in winter to make the most of the heat. In summer, opposite direction keeps room colder. Love them. Panagiota xx
Date: 6/18/2022 8:09:00 PM
I'm a big fan of ceiling fans myself: 'Tan Fastic! :) gw
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/18/2022 9:33:00 PM
And ...I am a fan of Gershon!! Who is more than clever.... GW Fan Club……… Panagiota
Date: 6/17/2022 4:52:00 PM
Very cool verse, Pangie. I can appreciate a nice breeze from a fan on a hot day. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/18/2022 9:37:00 PM
From the Central Valley of CA... It’s so hot here..not today...but heading for the 100’s In a few days. LOL..very cool reply)) Panagiota
Date: 6/17/2022 11:21:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, the ceiling fan does its Job very well. I would not be without it. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/17/2022 4:38:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, they are one of the bet inventions. We can not live without them. Enjoy your evening my dear friend Darlene. xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/17/2022 11:58:00 AM
Hello Darlene...Fans are our friends...where I live, it gets so hot!! I have 4 ceiling fans and three standing fans. Like you, cannot be without them. One of the best inventions ever! Dear friend. Panagiota xx
Date: 6/17/2022 7:28:00 AM
Excellent poetry! Some of your best! "Like a robin’s wings, it flutters. Casting soft, spinning shadows On white, wood-window shutters." Yes, it knows~the spirit intelligence moving its wings of eagle joy. It serves, humbly and simply, with a short, unpunctuated name like many truly good things. You get a FAV!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/17/2022 10:58:00 AM
Joe, I am humbled by your FAVING it and grateful. I appreciated your lovely interpretation of the sprit of a fan,even the unsophisticated name.!! I write poetry close to how I talk.)) Panagiota xx
Date: 6/17/2022 6:57:00 AM
Yes. Fan tastic. Love it . God bless you. Love, Gina
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/17/2022 10:52:00 AM
Gina! Greetings. I adore your comment, it put a smile on my face and this day.. Panagiota xxl
Date: 6/17/2022 6:21:00 AM
This poem was so musical and fun. A joy to read.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/17/2022 10:50:00 AM
Hey there Elena...thank you. I get that you and others liked it. That does my heart good... I do not write ala Shakespeare. I write ala myself.-))) Panagiota xx
Date: 6/16/2022 9:55:00 PM
To take an item, such as this, and create a poem as good as this, shows so much creativeness in your mind set, Pangie, Love this....
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/17/2022 10:45:00 AM
Hugs and my love to you Harry. I saw it as something beautiful. It was truly a great moment. You inspire me ! That is a great gift... Thank you. Panagiota xx

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