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'family'Tanka

my puppy and wolves
cat - tiger, rosewood n rose
gourd and large melon
I and master poet  Basho  
same genetic family
	
contest entry for Tanka poems
by Amy Green

Copyright © Neelam Sangwai | Year Posted 2014

relationshiptanka

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Carolyn Devonshire

April 29, 2014 at 1:59 PM

Awesome, Neelam. How wonderful it must be to be in the same genetic pool as Basho. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

April 27, 2014 at 7:09 PM

Great write. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

April 27, 2014 at 6:53 PM

Cool idea, all in the same genetic family!! Congrats for your win.

April 27, 2014 at 7:16 AM

A brilliant piece made you win, congrats, Neelam

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 27, 2014 at 2:06 AM

Great poem Neelam deserving such great win, congrats !

Poet Destroyer A

April 27, 2014 at 1:47 AM

Neelam, , awesome, winning tanka.... congrats on your super win. ... xox~ LINDA

April 16, 2014 at 6:02 AM

very good me myself cant actually see the connection bettween a guard and a large melon but great poem

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