Family Visit

Family visit.
Biological love is what we first experience
Walking as in trance but everyday life takes the gloss off
Children are a nuisance, but they are us and we love them
But are helpful when we are old 
...And then we discover love I mean true love a day 
Without her voice even when it is hectoring and it 
Invites loneliness. But the reason for this that lonely people 
Think more about death and fear dying alone.... forgetting we
All die alone, no one follow us into Hades.   
She has always been on my side and I have tried to be on 
her side I have failed a few times, but now that we are old it 
Is melted snow, the type that lingers on a tree’s 
North facing site in a sunken hollow.
If I have said anything I don’t want to know suspicion is 
a wrong emotion. So our love is based common suspicion, 
Upon not talking about the past and be glad when grand 
Children visits – if they are yours or not-
 And when they have gone there is silence while we wait
For the man with the scythe to come knocking.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/26/2014 8:36:00 AM
Nice pen here! Cool expressions from your heart dear friend ! I truly enjoyed! A 7 for you!Wishing you a very happy holiday season and happy New Year! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 12/26/2014 5:10:00 AM
I visited though not from your family,but as a member of soup family.a good thought.Regards dear poet Oskar. -Safa
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/26/2014 2:03:00 PM
thank you Muhamma
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